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One-Shot, The Velveteen Noose

Jan 26, 2010 23:34

Title: The Velveteen Noose
Author: Marmalade Fever
Genres: General, Mystery, Romance
Spoilers: EWE
Overall Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2329
Summary: If I can only pretend hard enough that this marriage is real, then it will be, and I will go hippity-hoppity off in the garden, made of flesh and blood instead of velveteen and sawdust. But my boot button ( Read more... )

the velveteen noose, one-shot

Comments 10

pokeystar January 27 2010, 17:30:24 UTC

I love, love, love this. Gorgeous. The lit references! Crazy!Hermione! Possibly Dark!Draco!

Utterly fantastic.

:-)

marmaladefever January 27 2010, 18:15:43 UTC

Thanks! :D

elvishly January 27 2010, 17:53:54 UTC

Woooowwwwwwwwww.

I really really enjoyed reading this.

marmaladefever January 27 2010, 18:17:04 UTC

Wow, that's a long wow!

I'm glad!

valentineninja January 27 2010, 19:40:15 UTC

Wow Marm, that was amazing. Crazy-Hermione is something I haven't read this well(or ever) I think. Though I am kind of slow this morning. When he burned the parchment, does that mean that a curse was lifted? I was so willing to believe that Draco was the one causing what was affecting Hermione, but this was a great twist. I'm glad to see you're still writing and this was a really interesting piece. Please keep writing more?

marmaladefever January 27 2010, 19:50:02 UTC

You know, I can't think of any other crazy!Hermione stories either. There's plenty of crazy Draco out there.

Yeah, that lifted the curse. It was the most expedient thing I could come up with that wasn't just a finite incantatem.

Oh, I'm sure I'll post something every once in awhile. Dramione seems to have gotten in my blood.

Know what's weird, though? So far I've only gotten one review for this on FF.net. Maybe the summary scared everyone off. XD

lulabelle72 January 27 2010, 20:21:47 UTC

Pokey rec'd this, so I came, intrigued by the thought of crazy!Hermione.

I feel a bit off myself, truth be told. Honestly -- now really, be honest -- did you not feel a tad insane yourself while writing? How do you get into someone like that's head?

Such a refreshing and, yes, strange deviation from the usual fanfic. You keep up the good work.

marmaladefever January 27 2010, 22:09:46 UTC

I don't know exactly. It's weirdly easy for me to get into that frame of mind while writing. Actually, once I've established a tone or style, I can usually keep it up almost indefinitely. *shrug* Or maybe I'm a little cuckoo myself. That's certainly a possibility. ;)

lemonade8 January 28 2010, 16:07:19 UTC

This was good, lots of tension. I wondered who had imperiused Hermione, and suspected bad!malfoy interference.

marmaladefever January 28 2010, 22:36:50 UTC

Ha ha. :) I think Hermione suspected the same thing for awhile.