Comments | marnidoo: Yelling at You

marnidoo

Yelling at You

Jan 07, 2011 22:41

Title : Yelling at you
Author : marnidoo
Rating : pg
Pairing : Junhyung/ Hyunseung
Summary : Hyunseung hates it. All he wanna do is screaming
Notes : This is my first time posting a fic here, be kind to me please ( Read more... )

genre: angst, pairing: junhyung/ hyunseung, rating: pg

Comments 14

lunaticbelle May 30 2011, 22:43:43 UTC

I actually read this when you posted it on beastattack, but I just made this LJ a few weeks ago. And because this fanfic impressed me a lot, I decided to come back and comment. :)

This fanfic is freaking awesome. I read it at least 5 times, it really impressed me. When I first read it, I didn't get that Hyunseung is mute until his past was revealed. :D
It was heartbreaking and sweet, I'm happy Hyunseung came back after their fight. :) I hope you'll keep up the good work! (I also enjoyed reading mending broken hearts!)

But that's it for now!!
Belle. <3

marnidoo May 31 2011, 15:29:54 UTC

Wow. I'm very grateful you took time to come back and comment! :)
Glad you liked it and seriously? 5 times? *bows* This really means a lot, thank you! Plus you read mending broken hearts? You're amazing!
I hope I'll write Junseung soon and maybe you'll read it ^^

Thank you very very much for reading and for your comment!
Is that your real name? Well, even if it's not, it's really classy! :)

lunaticbelle May 31 2011, 20:18:52 UTC

You're welcome :)And yes, at least 5 times^^ It just captured me. Their feelings/emotions seemed so real, and I could understand what they're going through. I could literally feel Hyunseungs frustration, his insecurities linked to desperation which led to anger. His fear of losing Junhyung, his jealousy that almost drove them to their breaking point. Poor devoted Junnie, who didn't get the situation at first. Maybe he couldn't really understand what Hyunseungs going through. But as soon when Hyunni thought about their life, he realised what Junnie always did for him <3 I love that Junhyung isn't the strong one in this, and that he lets Hyunseung comfort him. And I really liked how they made up without words. He just hugs him tighter and tighter. <3 ( ... )