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marnidoo

Not a hero

Jan 09, 2011 19:06

Title : Not a hero
Author : marnidoo
Rating : pg-13
Pairing : broken!Junseung
Summary : Hyunseung is afraid
Notes : For those who read my previous fic "Loving you was the best thing I could do", here is Hyunseung's part. I hope you'll like it because it was really hard to write ^^'

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genre: angst, pairing: junhyung/ hyunseung, rating: pg-13

Comments 14

akinoyui January 10 2011, 01:25:13 UTC

this...is depressing... T_T
although I kinda understand how Hyunseung was feeling... and I hope (really really much) that you will continue and mend our broken hearts!!! I can't agree with you more... Junhyung needs his Hyunseung and Hyunseung needs his Junhyung..

marnidoo January 10 2011, 12:42:46 UTC

I don't even know how I got there but yeah... words kept flooding and I was burying Junseung... T__T
I won't do it anymore (at least not for a while! I'm so sad for being that monster to them!)
Thank you so much for reading and I'll write next part ;)

jasleonie January 10 2011, 04:52:00 UTC

I felt my heart shatter into a million pieces reading this.
The way you describe how Seungie feels is quite beautiful.
Regardless of how painful it is. I'm glad this isn't the end also.
Thank you, bb ♥ 'Cause broken JunSeung is heartbreaking D:

marnidoo January 10 2011, 12:45:12 UTC

I'm glad you appreciated the way he's describing his feelings! I kinda had a hard time on it... But yay it isn't too bad... :)
Thanks to you for reading it and commenting!

carnival_pinup February 24 2011, 10:01:11 UTC

Oh Hyunseung ;______;
broken junseung breaks my heart everytime but i think they are the pairing which angst fits the best? (not that they shouldn't be together but yeah T____T ) it's amazing the way you write and express his insecurities. I kinda know how he feels.. *jabs the voice in his head* urgh! gonna read the series now to see them back together!

marnidoo February 24 2011, 20:05:09 UTC

In a way I loved Junhyung's part better... I don't know, maybe because it took me a lot of time and thoughts to write this one and I feel kinda exposed. *struggles with the voice as well* I really hope he never felt and will never feel that way though... *huggles Seung*

I just realized, this is angst. OMG! But did I only write angst? T.T

Btw, yes, life is cruel because angst really fits Junseung. I guess that's why I write angst that much. I love my OTP too much xD

Thank you for reading and commenting! I still can't believe you decided to read through my journal :D