Need you now

Mar 07, 2011 19:32


Title: Need you now
Author: Marnidoo
Rating: PG - 13
Pairing: Dooseob
Notes: And this is angst again.
Summary: Doojoon have been fighting this urge for a while but now all he needs is Yoseob.

Need you now

He scrolled down the screen until he landed on the name he was looking for.

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pairing: doojoon/ yoseob, genre: angst, rating: pg-13

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leejaehwa7 March 7 2011, 19:02:57 UTC
this was sad and beautiful at the same time...poor doojoon...but yoseob couldn't lie >.<

sad ending but i still liked the story :*)

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marnidoo March 7 2011, 20:05:35 UTC
I couldn't make him too heartless so yes, he had to at least stop lying...
I'm glad you liked it despite the sad ending :)
Thank you for reading and commenting!

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smericas_words March 7 2011, 19:35:12 UTC
I'm not the biggest DooSeob fan ever. This only being the second fic I've ever commented on with DooSeob as the only pairing, and the first I commented on yesterday xD
But when I read And this is angst again. I had to read it, especially since it was from you.
And I have to say, it was so beautiful. So sad, but so good.
I love your angst haha.
Thanks for sharing this~

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marnidoo March 7 2011, 21:16:40 UTC
Things change I guess~ The more you'll read about them the more you'll love them... Ahem. I can't help but to advertise my OTPs xD
I'm flattered that you decided to comment on this, especially when you don't like the pairing, really <3
Aww... Thank you *hugs* Actually I'm afraid that people will think I'm a depressive mess that can only write angst >.< but since some still like it, it's good! :)
While writing it I was feeling like I haven't written in ages and I was anxious about the result, it makes me so happy you found it beautiful (especially because you do know some things about writing beautiful pieces)
Keep on loving it, you might end up being alone... xD
Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

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smericas_words March 8 2011, 03:25:07 UTC
I know, it's weird actually. In all of the time since Beast debuted I never wanted to read Dooseob. But lately...I dunno. It's growing on me haha.
But really! I wish I could write angst! Maybe one day you and I will switch places and you'll write fluff and I'll write angst and we'll both be happy with our writing lol.
You're very welcome! :D

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marnidoo March 9 2011, 21:00:34 UTC
Dooseob is goooood that is why ;)
Not that you really care but today I had this urge to write something... well, I don't know if happy is the word, but something that doesn't end with someone in pain xD So yeah, made me think about what you said ^^
Hopefully you'll be able to write an angst that makes you proud :D I've faith in your skills actually ;)

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marnidoo March 7 2011, 21:22:07 UTC
And I think he needs this, so go ahead. (but be discreet or you'll get yourself killed xD)
I'm sad that you blame Yoseob though. Really don't :)
Thanks~ I'm glad you did! ^^

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gowniarzpaler March 7 2011, 19:46:42 UTC
T_________T
oh dear T^T i don't like angst [because i love happy ending, because i know, that in real life happy ending does not happen] but i read them.
and this..
oh fuck, this is so beautiful, but very sad, angst.
AND I DON'T LIKE BROKEN!DOOSEOB DDDDD:<<<<
but this..
wijefguowgbefuijgbwoihfowoeigkhbfoie i love it.
oh hon, what do you do to me D:< i love your story, really
love u, hoonn~~
*VERY BIG HUUGGGGGGGG* because i need it D:<

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marnidoo March 7 2011, 21:27:02 UTC
Oh dear, I'm begging you for pardon really! I knew you wouldn't like it but I couldn't help but to write it...
I'll keep my promise and write a happy (with happy ending!) DooSeob for you as soon as I'm done with MBH! Does that make you feel better?
I know!! *slaps self* even I don't like Broken!DooSeob usually but I don't know what happened. I had this sudden will to make Doojoon suffer..? *hides before you kill her*
I'm sorry sorry sorry! I'll make it up to you! *Hugs you back really tightly*
Love you too <33 and thanks for reading anyway :)

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gowniarzpaler March 8 2011, 20:52:11 UTC
hm................
I forgive you! i understand you because sometimes I write angst, and my friends hate me because I killed their character ;^;
YEAH, I FEEL BETTER!!!!!11111oneoneone I would have read it but i'll wait XD'
doojoon suffer ;;;;;;;;; *you broke my heart* but.. i forgive you, because doojoon still alive XDDD"
awwwwww, thank youuu for huuuugs<3333

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marnidoo March 9 2011, 21:34:04 UTC
Ah! Great! I wouldn't want you to stay mad at me (a)
Haha, that's good! Writing angst feels good from time to time seriously ;)
I'm on it, really I'm on it! Be patient and I'll make you happy I swear :D
Nah, if he suffers you just have to go and hug him ;) That's pretty cool huh?
Thank you you! <333
*hugs*

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carnival_pinup March 7 2011, 20:22:45 UTC
was just going to sleep but I saw this update and I had to read it sdlkfkslm (even though I was like 'I will just spot and read it tml', I ended up finishing it 8'D )

I love your angst. Period.
Seobbie waee ;_;
He couldn't lie. Cause, that's just him. Even though it's heartbreaking ;__; And watching Doojoon be all desparate..

Cause he’d rather hurt than feel nothing at all and he loved the other so much that he’d rather be his one night stand once in a while that living without that genuine smile, this warm body and those gentle touches at all.
The ending is perfect for this fic. Well, not in a yayhappyending way but yeah.. Beautifully done.

And I can't wait for that last chapter of MBH from you <3

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marnidoo March 7 2011, 21:42:50 UTC
Oh. I hope you won't end up being tired tomorrow because of this... But it wasn't long hm? (a ( ... )

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carnival_pinup March 8 2011, 02:21:34 UTC
Nahhh it wasn't long and I'm alright :3

Well, I love well-written angst so... Yep.
It's okay ^_^ Go on~ I think it's interesting to see the story from the author's POV too. *shrugs* He's just not that kind of guy to be totally heartless I feel, even though he may end up doing a lot of horrible things (or is this just my bias speaking D: ). And yeah, I can imagine Doojoon being the way he is here too and this puts it into perspective.

Don't worry about long comments, I like reading them ;D

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marnidoo March 9 2011, 21:08:14 UTC
Great ;)

Aw, thanks :D
I'm really glad you understood what I meant because I wasn't so sure myself xD I wrote something about Yoseob actually but I don't think I'll post it, there's probably no point.
Haha your bias certainly speaks honey but it's right cause Yoseob isn't heartless at all, not even in that terrible piece of mine ;)
It makes me sad but yes, a heartbroken Doojoon who still managed to take decisions (the good ones) is how I see him...

Hehe, it's nice since I do write without thinking about length xD

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