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maroon_sue

Blast to the Past? : Chapter 1

Jan 06, 2009 17:01

Timeline: (DA) Post Freak Nation. (SPN) Just after It’s the great pumpkin, Sam Winchester.

A/N: Just for the sake of this story, let’s assume the town that escapes Uriel’s clutches was in Seattle.

Beta: Thanks to the super awesome Alexis! *hugs*

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dark angel, crossover, supernatural, fan fiction, alec, max

Comments 12

eternal_dolor January 10 2009, 22:40:11 UTC

Cool story. I'm looking forward to more

maroon_sue January 11 2009, 11:30:25 UTC

Thanks for the review :) The second chapter should be up by this week.

takobella January 13 2009, 10:15:56 UTC

this seems cool so far

maroon_sue January 16 2009, 12:43:16 UTC

Thank you for the review!

of_too_minds January 15 2009, 04:47:42 UTC

You already know I love this, sweetie, but I'll say it again. I love it and I'm hungry for more!

It's the complex relationship between Max and Alec and the brothers that sucked me right in to this story. The conversation in the car where Alec assumes they're clones and Dean assumes they're father and son is tragic. They're both so messed up.

maroon_sue January 16 2009, 12:50:07 UTC

Hee! *hugs Alexis* You're the best, sweetie, you do know that right? :)

Thanks for the double (or was it triple? Quadruple?(sp??) reviews hehe You have this knack of taking my 8000+ words chapter and turning it into the best analysis ever. That's why I can't live without you *chains Alexis to side*

mrstotten March 8 2009, 09:52:46 UTC

‘I have been waiting for you. The savior and her worthy warrior.’

I liked this line, also liked it when he mentioned their destiny's were entwined.

I love the full premise of this, the idea is great. Your max and Alec are very in character and I especially love your snarky Alec.

I also particuarly loved
He moaned again, his face pressing into the curve of her neck, his warm breath washing over her cold skin. She could feel one of his hands brushing against the side of her ribs and she doubled her effort. With his hands on her, unnamed and unidentified feelings had started to make their presence known and that tiny sputter of pleasure threw her off her track. And when Max didn’t like something, she didn’t sit around to find out why.

the start of something??? and very Max.

Your writing style is lovely, very descriptive, particuarly lines like

She could smell the crushed grass and the feel of pebbles digging into her back. What the hell happened?

Off to read the next chapter

Mags

maroon_sue March 9 2009, 05:26:36 UTC

Thanks for the review Mags!

davincis_girl May 19 2009, 05:31:24 UTC

Oh...oh...oh. Dark Angel/Supernatural is so great. I'm very interested in where this is going.

maroon_sue May 19 2009, 05:52:05 UTC

Haha! Glad you enjoy this :D Thanks for the review!