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jensenlover89 January 20 2009, 06:35:45 UTC
I love this story so far!

I love the interaction between Dean and Alec, it's very entertaining!

Please update soon! :D

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maroon_sue January 20 2009, 06:39:37 UTC
Hee! I'm glad you like this :D You know what, I'm working on Chap 3 right now. Thanks for the review!

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jensenlover89 January 20 2009, 06:46:15 UTC
Yay! I can't wait to read it! :D

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mrstotten March 8 2009, 10:25:22 UTC
Alec and Max looked at each other before he replied in an off hand manner. ‘It’s nothing, an inside joke.’ He still thought the entire situation was fishy and Intel wasn’t something he wanted to share freely. Not yet.
I love that Alec always thinks as a soldier first
And then this

Dean scrutinized the thin smile and hard eyes silently and opted to let it slide. For now.

I can almost see the standoff in my head :)

But married people can get a divorce. I’m stuck with you like a Siamese twin.’
‘Conjoined twin. How many times have I told you, Dean. It’s conjoined twin.’

Lovely Sam/Dean interaction
Why are we hovering over Dean’s porn?’ Sam called out as he stepped closer and tried to see what the fuss was about.

Lol, very Sam :)
He could be Alec’s twin, much more than Ben. The same face (obviously), the cockiness that bordered on arrogance, and the smile that could please as well as irritate the hell out of you. But beyond that, she could not find any more similarities. Dean was years older than Alec and there was something else ( ... )

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maroon_sue March 9 2009, 07:40:37 UTC
I'm glad you're enjoying this :)

From the first time I knew I wanted to write a DA/SPN crossover, that scene in the motel kinda stuck in my head, that's how I wanted them to meet each other. A little wary, a little hostile, lots of skepticism.. The Dean/Alec scene in the car is my personal favourite too :) They can be so similar but yet so different at the same time, huh?

Thank you for this review! :)

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davincis_girl May 19 2009, 05:50:16 UTC
There is so much to love about this chapter. The bit about the old married couples was great. ‘People who freak out over porn and then go over to a corner to huddle are bad news.’ was awesome. I also liked Dean's feeling Alec out about their realtionship.

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maroon_sue May 19 2009, 06:14:01 UTC
:D
Thank you! I had my doubts at first about writing Sam and Dean, but I kinda like that motel scene myself. The Dean/Alec scene is another favourite :) I'm glad you enjoy it too. Thanks for the review!

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