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Anywhere, USA PArt Two: Chapter 4

Jun 20, 2011 23:08

Title: Anywhere USA
Author: Marsabi
Summary: This is a two part story with multiple chapters ( Read more... )

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Comments 4

scotianova June 21 2011, 08:32:00 UTC

Marsabi, you know, this is one of those stories, I'm looking for each day!
I love the switches:
Reid knowing Luke already, his connection to Emma,
he's rude, but has a tiny bit more social skills...
Reid as someone, who serves as kind of an "outside" (outside - like not being involved in the crazy Oakdalian point of views) observer, revealing the whole insane Noah-Ameera-Luke-mess...
and I love,how easy Luke is around his siblings, how carefree and relaxed,
and I hope he opens up soon to Reid!

Amazing, thrilling story and (I have to repeat it!) I love it!

marsabi June 21 2011, 13:58:57 UTC

Thanks for this lovely comment! It made my day! Reid is the outsider here, yes. Except, he will not really be an outsider with Luke, right? And Luke= love. He so deserves a person to appreciate him. Reid will get closer and closer to the truth with Luke... Thanks again!

rtruffles June 28 2011, 17:44:53 UTC

Poor Reid, he's such a goner!!!

I loved this chapter too.

Noah is such an ass. I really think that he would have blamed Luke for Ameera's seizures, even if Luke hadn't been anywhere in the vacinity.

Your Lily is spot on in this fic too.

Another amazing chapter!

marsabi June 28 2011, 18:02:03 UTC

Thanks so much! He is a goner, lol!