drabble for rtruffles

[marsabi]

Rtruffles and I once discussed this idea and some drabble happened for it

Comments

[rhiannonhero]

Aw, this was sweet and sad. :( :( Nice job!

(Also, a drabble is exactly 100 words, that's the definition of a drabble, so this isn't a drabble, though it's very good and enjoyable to read! :) source: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Drabble)

Again, it was great! :)

[marsabi]

Thanks! Since I always write more than 100 words, I guess none of my drabble=drabble!

[sleeper6]

So good! It's sad, of course, to imagine people close to you succumbing to this disease but Luke is strong and he has Reid. And Emma has Luke and Reid .

Really like how you structured this too. Great fic!

[marsabi]

Thanks so much!

[rtruffles]

Thanks for this!!

This is wonderful-so emotional and vivid.

Reid feeling helpless and desperately wanting to help Luke and Emma, but limited by not actually being God.

I loved the ending-so beautiful!

Thanks again!

[marsabi]

Yay! I'm glad you liked it!

[bluemagicrose]

This is just so beautiful. I don't know what else to say. Just beautiful.

[marsabi]

Thanks so much!

[_alicesprings]

Luke bravely smiles at his dad and grandma. He talks horse flesh with Holden, waiting for him to leave. Holden is fooled. You wouldn’t be. Luke is now the language you speak, the body you recognize. You see his jaw is tight, his smile too broad, his eyes glittering, and your own body responds, your chest aching, head throbbing. You and Luke are so close, you feel conjoined.

Beautiful! Sad but lovely, thank you!

[marsabi]

Thanks! I know it is a bit sad for a fic right before the holidays, but it just got in my head today...I'm glad you liked it!