Lure BB: The Road Home Chapters 3 and 4

[marsabi]

Comments

[kccalgal]

Heh heh heh, I recognize the cheetos and powdered sugar doughnuts, and I threw my socks away when the floor turned them black. They are having a real road trip through the West!

[marsabi]

Lol! Yeah, wherever possible, I tried to work in the ideas from friends---sort of as a way to pay homage to all the great encouragement I got all those months back when I doubted I could write it/it would be read...

[kccalgal]

I will always read anything you write. I always enjoy your stories.

[smoothlikebutta]

Hee! Of course Luke wouldn't be able to give up Smooch, and I love how Reid was already resigned to that from the beginning.

[marsabi]

Thanks! I love getting specific feedback like this comment! And yeah, Reid knows Luke so well...

[sajaal]

I have a sneaky feeling that you're going to make me cry in this one..almost happened when Luke was thinking about those tiny bottles in the hotel fridge...I hate the thought of him going back to that state and what pushed him their in the first place.

As always the writing is wonderful and I love Reid talking to the waitress and explaining a procedure...all that humanity that he learned from Luke. Luke, finding the stray....I just love this line,

"His tail whipped happily and he buried his head at Luke’s crotch and sniffed.

Reid experienced dog-envy for the first time." LOL

So gooood, I will continue reading tomorrow night then I can give my full attention to the story:-)

[marsabi]

Thanks so much! I always love hearing specifically what somebody likes! I truly appreciate your comments on specific chapters! Thanks sooo much!
Yes, it does have sad parts...but I hope the feeling of their mutual love helps

[sleeper6]

Luke's feet! I instantly love any fic with feet (yeah, I have my big foot fetish).

Their banter is so fun. They're just trying to get along but it's so natural for them to just be together, you know? I love that about them.

The roadside attractions are funny! I've too wondered what they really are (I never stop).

Luke going to a meeting? Oh, this breaks my heart. Poor Luke. BUT I'm glad he's seeking help. And that Reid supports it.

The dog! I never pictured them with pets but I can see this dog easily fitting into their lives.

Great chapter!

[cindergal]

Love what you did with these two chapters. Great job!

[marsabi]

Hooray! Thanks!