Off the Hook- Part Two

[marsarmygurl]

Comments

[ninjafrog30]

ohh NOOO!!!! not the-catching-them-in-the-act-through-a-window thing! aww!! POOR LITTLE ZACKY V!!!! *tear* i wanna give him a fuckin' hug!! poor baby!! but, hot DAYYUUMM, was that smut-a-licious!! once again, you are the master of word-porn! i bow to you, oh great one! nice visual! i liked it alot!! ;)!! nice job!! i cant wait to read what happened after!!!! and, woo! is jared a WA-HORE!!! (LMAO!!!) and, brian is just...yuum! two thumbs up!! :)!!

[marsarmygurl]

Glad you liked it!!! I know you're not a humungo fan of crossovers, so to hear that you thought it was good, makes me smile... And yes dear little ZV (pets his cute little head) don't worry, he'll get the last laugh in the end. And Jared totally is a WA-HORE! I really can't write him any other way though, and it totally fits in with the story.. Plus, the visuals are always nice. Heehee... Thanks for the nice words sweet pea!

[dead_22]

Amazing story I love it. I can't wait to read more! I feel so sorry for Zacky, that isn't nice to see.

[marsarmygurl]

Thanks so much for the nice comment.. It actually inspired me to finally pic this story back up and post another chapter (it should be up in a couple days) I didn't even know people were reading it!

[sumrndmgrl]

I just now stumbled across this story but I hope there's another part coming up. I'm sucked in! :)

[marsarmygurl]

Thanks so much! It's cool to know people are actually reading it! I'm gonna try my hardest to get the new chap up this week!