OKAY. THIS IS MY ANSWER TO "I AM A FUCKING SHITTY WRITER"

[marsbareater12]

Because I was writing, right? And I realized that I was. And I proceeded to angst about it for a couple of hours.

And then go and change my whole...er, thing of writing? Totally forgot what it was called - and came out with this. Pretty happy, for once.

Jacob groaned, his back hitting the wall, his hands scrabbling on Ryan’s back.
“Mine,” Ryan

Comments

[melange11]

Interesting. I wonder what Jacob really is: angel or demon or something entirely different? Not sure if that was your intention, but I didn't get the reason of his retreat until the wings are revealed towards the end. Building tension like that made the piece quite good. :)

[marsbareater12]

Um, thanks? :P

I've no fucking idea what he is either. Don't matter though - in the process of planning out a new novella at the moment. Based off two KT fics that've been running around in my head since March. But year, point is, Jacob don't matter anymore :P