[fic] Coloured Candlelight

[marsbareater12]

Title: Coloured Candlelight
Pairing: Maru/Kame if you squint.
Wordcount: ~2,000
Rating: R for attempted creepiness
Genre/Warning: AU, horror, starts in media res
Summary: Kame burns in Ueda’s eyes
Notes: Can you tell I hang out in je_squickfic? :P Betaed by the lovely kjyr. Also, heavily based on this.

Hold them down our bleeding suspects
(Just because,

Comments

[locquiz]

OMG That was- dsfhfssdyuouovfvbos!

Darn creepy.. I was just thinking about reading a dark theme fic..and this came up. Kudos! I like it. It reminds me of the short story, 'the landlady' by Roald Dahl. A-and.. the last line,

“I told you, my turtle, you’ll be free.”

dsiuhiwgfawgysgoaw *smashes keyboard*

Loves this. Thanks for sharing! =D

[marsbareater12]

I haven't read that story. D: I must get on it, straightaway!

Thank you. :) I had issues with that last line. Endings are a bugger to get right.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

[melange11]

Brilliant story. The style is elaborate, the happenings terrifying and fascinating at the same time. The skin and butterflies reminded me of ‘Silence of the Lambs’, but they fit Tacchan too, especially the butterflies! I’ve a feeling this would work just as well with original characters - but of course it’s your choice.

Anyway, thanks for posting. I really enjoyed reading it. <3

[marsbareater12]

Thank you!

The original idea came with Kame in it, so I decided not to change it. 'Sides, none of my OCs would fit it! D: Not the ones I'm currently working with anyway.

Thanks for reading and commmenitng.