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marshmallowtea

be myself be yourself ; jonghyun/minho

Oct 25, 2010 04:08

be myself, be yourself; minho/jonghyun.
warnings: rough talk, dub-con, humiliation
a/n: written in like. half an hour? I DON'T KNOW, I DIDN'T STOP. I drug myself out of bed for this. basically, this is part of something indelible_x and I are going to be working on.I just wanted to post more rough smut, don't judge me. :c

( he's suddenly face to nose wtih a shaking, pissed off Choi Minho )

type: smut, pairing: jonghyun/minho, group: shinee, rating: nc-17

Comments 8

yampanda October 25 2010, 11:15:13 UTC

/PUTS A SNORLAX HERE

yampanda October 25 2010, 11:23:43 UTC

Suddenly he's crushing their mouths together, forcing his tongue between the older male's lips

Pants becomes tight.

"I don't give a fuck." Minho replies calmly, easily flipping their positions so his chest is resting against Jonghyun's back, pressing lips close to his ear, loving the way jonghyun is needily bucking into his touches. "Strip, now. Make yourself useful, instead of the stupid arrogant shit you are."

I CRAI MY PANTS THEY BE TIGHT OH MINHO WHY U SO HAWT AND NOCURR

"What now, cradle snatcher?"
LOLOLOLOL I DIED OK

"Tell me how much you love cock."

"Are you serious?" Minho quirks an eyebrow and gives a sensual smirk, blood and bruises and all; and it's at this that Jonghyun fucking envies him.

"I-i love it."

YOUR DURRRTAHTOK IS DA BEST

"I want your cock, deep inside me. stretching me open, making me scream, filling me up with your hot cum. I want you biting my shoulder, telling me I'm worthless, then begging me to take it. I want...I want to be Taemin," he whispers; and Minho knows he's fallen right where he wants ( ... )

marshmallowtea October 26 2010, 04:24:40 UTC

LMFAO YAM A SNORLAX. I love you, and I love them. A+ spotting.

negl this was a BLAST to write. I've never been THIS proud of something I churned out so quickly, with minimal editing (prolly a few typos - I went from lapslock to proper), and aksjdkdsjfnkjsdnf.

You kept it about the psychological battle for dominance that sex honestly sums it up perfectly. Beautiful description.

♥ ty for the comment :)

indelible_x October 26 2010, 00:36:55 UTC

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marshmallowtea October 26 2010, 04:50:26 UTC

KELSEY, WHAT THE FUCK IS YOUR COMMENT AND WHY DO I ENJOY IT. :| ♥ You are lucky I speak fluent derp keysmash, missy. We'd have issues down south if I didn't. Omg what am I saying.

Jonghyun prolly would take it as a challenge. AND THIS JUST MAKES ME ESSITED TO START OUR THING. but yeah, Minho just seriously walking off and leaving him was great to write, okay. You know he prolly had a hard time walking with how rough Minho was slamming into him. whoops, forgot to add more dirty talk. whatever. :D

mrsclaychoi August 22 2011, 10:59:29 UTC

ok..i knew he would humiliate him but damn...his words are way too cruel,too personal...I was starting to feel sorry for jongie O_O

but regardless,id be a lie if i said this wasnt hot

rainstormraider October 11 2011, 23:12:47 UTC

DAYUM.
Hot and just a lil sad.
Minho's got Jonghyun under his skin even if he'll never admit to it.
Jonghyun's hope-filled eyes are LOVE.

masterk3y October 11 2011, 23:44:20 UTC

THIS IS SO HOT! BUT SO SAD!
Poor Jjong! :'(
This is exactly what I needed right now ;___; <- this might sound weird or bad but I don't care! I just needed something simply smutty and hot and intense because I was thinking too much.
SO, I love you so much for sharing this.
THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! <3