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marshwiggledyke

A Copper's Instinct: Chapter 9

Aug 28, 2010 13:10

Title: A Copper's Instinct
Fandom: Hot Fuzz
Characters/Pairings: Nicholas/Danny, Nicholas/OC, Doris, Bob, Andes, Saxon, Turners, OC
Rating: PG-15

( Chapter 9 )

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Comments 11

random_nexus August 30 2010, 21:35:17 UTC

*hugs them both* You two doofuses... doofii... dorks! <3
Okay, now, kicking Kinnell arse is definetly a GOOD idea. I would love to help, if I could.

Still prefer the ball-shredder notion.

Ahem.

EXCELLENT! As you know, but again, I am enjoying this like crazy!
:D

freudian_lisp August 30 2010, 22:49:52 UTC

Aw, this chapter broke and melted my heart, at the same time!

I was a bit surprised to see that Nick isn't the only one being a Big Fat Idiot - maybe it’s time for Danny to arrive on time at least a couple of days a week? (Although that might be a bit much to ask for.)

Ffffinally. Kinnell, yo betta watch yo back!

And I agree with random_nexus, this was EXCELLENT (but way too short!).

marshwiggledyke August 30 2010, 23:28:22 UTC

I was a bit surprised to see that Nick isn't the only one being a Big Fat Idiot - maybe it’s time for Danny to arrive on time at least a couple of days a week?

Yeah, Nicholas tried on that account. But Danny sleeps late, loses stuff in the mornings, and then Nicholas has to yell at him, which is not fun for either of them. Or did you mean something else by Danny being an idiot? *curious!*

this chapter broke and melted my heart

Eeee thankyou.

freudian_lisp September 1 2010, 21:34:08 UTC

Hurr, I’m bad with words. I was just thinking of the fact that their relationship has been strained during this fic and it might not only have been all Nick’s fault, even though he’s probably the biggest idiot of the two.

marshwiggledyke September 1 2010, 21:45:22 UTC

:D :D :D :D That was exactly what I was hoping to hear, but I didn't want to say it until I heard what you honestly thought. It takes two to destruct a relationship, although guilty people tend to make the first move.

Yay you picked that up!

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storyfan September 1 2010, 05:38:03 UTC

These voices are perfect and Doris is a fangirl!!! Just like us!!!!

marshwiggledyke September 1 2010, 13:20:32 UTC

She so is. And it greatly amuses me to have a slash fangirl amongst the ranks of the police station and making Danny and Nicholas a bit (or very) uncomfortable.

I wrote a story once about Doris stalking them. Strangely, it all turns out okay.

Gnee. <3

pebblerocker September 2 2010, 04:17:11 UTC

*sniff sniff* Yay!!

I am loving this all the way through. Thank you!