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On Thursday the 18th at 11:30 AM EDT, The Kepler Team Found This...
Apr 20, 2013 11:35
old pond
the strider’s leg dimples
a star
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origa
April 21 2013, 10:06:41 UTC
Hi Martin! That's a beautiful haiku :)
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martin51144
April 21 2013, 13:11:19 UTC
Hi origa,
Thank you! It's good to hear from you. Do you plan to have another contest? I would appreciate your opinion on another version of this attempt:
a stillness
under the strider’s leg
dimpled star
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origa
April 24 2013, 07:22:58 UTC
Hi Martin, you are welcome. Yes, I am planning the next contest in May -- stay tuned! The first version is better, imo.
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Thank you! It's good to hear from you. Do you plan to have another contest? I would appreciate your opinion on another version of this attempt:
a stillness
under the strider’s leg
dimpled star
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