ok...here's the prolouge for my nanowrimo thing, so tell me what you think, like if I could squeeze a half decent novel out of it...kindly put behind a cut for those of you who don't care...( prolouge )
You used the word accurately twice, which makes it sound kind of repetetive...
I don't know if you could squeeze a whole novel out of it. Your cliffhanger makes it sound as though the book would be about the change, yet you say it's rather sudden. So how do you write a whole novel about that? Unless, of course, you're going to write about AFTER the change...which would change everything...(heh. I'm liking the word "change", aren't I?)
Sounds like it could be philosophical.
Mmmm...philosophy. *licks lips*
Okay, just ignore me. I'm just commenting for the sake of commenting, pretty much.
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I don't know if you could squeeze a whole novel out of it. Your cliffhanger makes it sound as though the book would be about the change, yet you say it's rather sudden. So how do you write a whole novel about that? Unless, of course, you're going to write about AFTER the change...which would change everything...(heh. I'm liking the word "change", aren't I?)
Sounds like it could be philosophical.
Mmmm...philosophy. *licks lips*
Okay, just ignore me. I'm just commenting for the sake of commenting, pretty much.
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But if I had just said "Yes", that wouldn't have been very in-depth.
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any ideas of where I could go with this?
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