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Fic: The one that didn't go well

Aug 02, 2009 23:53

Title: The one that didn't go well.
Author: modestroad
Crossover: Iron Man/Daredevil
Recipient: pdantzerCharacters: Tony Stark, Matt Murdock, Pepper Potts ( Read more... )

iron man, daredevil

Comments 10

pdantzler August 3 2009, 04:53:00 UTC

I love how you make Tony a fixer. Sadly, I am a fixer and I can recognize another one. It's hard when you run around trying to save people and make everything better. Especially when others prefer not to be saved or fixed.

I really like this story and its simplicity. I tend to write long, drawn-out saga, and I admire writers who can get in there and show vivid scenes without dragging everything out.

And since Batman is my favorite superhero and I love everything Babs, kudos for that, too.

I hope you continue to write more,

Perry

modestroad August 3 2009, 07:26:36 UTC

I'm glad you like it. I believe that all (okay, most) superheroes are fixers. They try to make the world a better place to be and you know, that's not going to happen :)

Hmm, a sequel? With Babs and Tony? Those two together will be like sodium and water. Or they will end up having a hot one night stand. lol

ficwize August 3 2009, 17:24:46 UTC

This was a lot of fun! I like that Matt dosn't fold to Tony's charm, and I love that Tony refused to talk about where he got his information. It's all kinds of shady, but it really fits his personality. Makes me wonder if the Avenger Initiative is behind it all...

Also, your Pepper is spot on. :)

Nice job!

modestroad August 3 2009, 19:15:58 UTC

Thank you :) It was a bit hard to write since I've only start reading Iron Man (you can blame the amazing Robert Downey Jr.) and I wasn't sure if I had his voice.

Pepper on the other hand is sooo easy to write!

ragingpie August 6 2009, 01:14:28 UTC

I love that even when rebuffed, Tony continues to try steamroll over people and get what he wants. He's obviously not used to being told "no." Nice little crossover at the end, too!

modestroad August 6 2009, 08:33:30 UTC

No, he's not *grin* But that's why we love him, no? The crossover at the end...I just had to do it!

tartanshell August 6 2009, 05:31:20 UTC

Oh, I liked this a lot! I love that Matt says no, and his reasons for doing so. Lovely fic!

modestroad August 6 2009, 08:36:15 UTC

Matt just wants to see if it will work to other people first and then...maybe...he'll think about it for a while (he's the King of angst after all) before pretending that the meeting never happen.

:D

(Also can I say that I have no words for your story? I didn't left a comment because I don't know what to say. What one can say about perfection?)

st_aurafina September 30 2009, 07:26:51 UTC

Oh, Tony! It's so very him to think that a simple fix will make things better. I really liked this, especially the surprise crossover at the end.

modestroad September 30 2009, 07:47:12 UTC

:D Thanks! Tony's a fixer. Iron Man is the big proof of that. And I just love Barbara and had to write her somehow.