Comments | marveloustales: Fic: Monster by severedscythe, Wiccan/Hulkling, slash, rated PG

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Fic: Monster by severedscythe, Wiccan/Hulkling, slash, rated PG

Aug 13, 2008 08:47

Title: Monster
Author: severedscythePrompt: 616 | Wiccan/Hulkling | Slash | It takes a special kind of hero not to kill the guy who punched your boyfriend through a wall ( Read more... )

wiccan, slash, young avengers, hulkling

Comments 13

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Re: Mod speaking severedscythe August 13 2008, 01:00:50 UTC

I went through and fixed it. sorry, I thought my formatting had carried over, and it didn't. It looked fine in the journal entry page, but when I pressed post it went aSDFLKAJDSFLKAJSDF.

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Re: Mod speaking severedscythe August 13 2008, 01:13:30 UTC

It's been doing that to me a lot lately.

:B! No problem!

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severedscythe August 13 2008, 01:45:59 UTC

:B I'm glad you like it. <3<3

dazzledfirestar August 13 2008, 02:43:54 UTC

*shiver* Wow, that was intense! I love how you dealt with someone's true name, and how Billy could use that. Excellent work! :D

severedscythe August 13 2008, 03:06:16 UTC

:B!!!

Yeah, there's so much lore surrounding names and things, and yeah. >> I'm glad you liked it.

liliaeth August 13 2008, 06:54:59 UTC

scary look at Wiccan

severedscythe August 13 2008, 07:00:24 UTC

:B That was what I was aiming for. Everyone kinda bypasses the fact that he's easily the scariest one of all of them, because his will is his power.

deannawol August 13 2008, 07:17:09 UTC

I love the crisis of faith/identity at the end and Teddy trying to comfort. And interesting that it wasn't Teddy on the 'monster' kick but rather Billy. Great piece.

severedscythe August 13 2008, 07:19:24 UTC

I always wanted to see what it would be like for Billy if he ever confronted exactly what he could become and how far he'd go for teddy, y'know? XD

thanks!