One Shot

[marvhaa]

Title: Chance
Author: marvhaa
Rating: G
Pairing: Nishikato
Genre: Angst
Summary: One Important Phone Call
A/N: inspired by the song "Jesus take the wheel" by Carrie Underwood. i love that song and played it over and over again when suddenly the idea of this fic poped in my mind..xD

Comments

[clutzynew]

snatches first??

[clutzynew]

noooo no you didnt u killed ryo!?!?!?! OMG!!! NOOOOOO!!!!
(you must continue and bring ryo back to life!!!!!!!) hmmm maybe you should get a beta reader cause there are grammatical errors but its not something that writing and reading more won't fix =D
nice job =D

[marvhaa]

i killed him!!! T_T
i'm sorry for that..me is really sad to..
but i'm still not sure about continuing the story ^^

i'm was thingking about the same thing!
but i'm still a bit confused,, (because i'm still a newbie xD)
how can i get a beta reader??
any advice?? ^_____^

[clutzynew]

oh no you didnt!!!! ur not gonna continue!??!?! you haveto!!!! ( i forgot to tell you that i LOVE that song too!!! =DDDD)
hmmm about the beta reader, i'm not so sure cuz i don't have a betaer either but i help beta but since i'm in a tight schedule to get my high school credits,... i can't guarantee that i can help you but you can post an entry to ask people if they could help you beta =D
sorry D=

[newskattuneito]

uwahhhhhhh u remind me abt his accident uhuhuhu
but its so sweet at last ryo said I LOVE YOU

continue it ..make it ryo was not died..he under coma and then he wake up he dun know anything about shige at all...how???? (seem like hana yori dango ne!)

[marvhaa]

i want to make him said it even for once..lol

HANADAN!! it sure will be interesting ne~ ^^
i'll think about it..because i never made a sequel before..xD

[2morrow_is_now]

nooonoonono.... YOU DID NOT JUST KILL RYO!!!
or then you did, i s'pose.

...anyway, good work grammar aside
even f you killed him.

[marvhaa]

i'm sorry! i killed him!! >.<
it can't be help..lol

glad that you like it..eventhough my grammar suck

thank you for reading~ ^__^

oh look. nishikaato icon. \:D/

[ryo_icia]

i ish not first. T_T. kiddiiing.

nice fic though, angsty. it feels a bit rushed though. *agrees with clutzynew too.*

Re: oh look. nishikaato icon. \:D/

[marvhaa]

haha..thank you~

i wrote this fic just two hours before posting it..
i should've checked and edited it first before posting it..my bad..lol xDD
(i don't know why i was in a hurry back then..lol)

i know i should get a beta reader xDDD

[tegopii]

the one thing I like about endings like this is that I can make up the rest in my head
and in my head shige finds ryo in the hospital 100% alive, just a little bit crazy. Yep.
Yep.

T____T; thanks <3

[marvhaa]

that's the reason i make an ending like this..
so people can use their own imagination lol xD

thank you for reading and commenting~ ^________^

<3 <3 <3