Ohmyword--our baby's about to be killed dead by the parent you don't want to put out! Holy moses! If his heart doesn't leap outta his chest twill be a miracle! Where's his ma and will she protect this lastest adventure!? You guys, keep ginning--gots to have more even though it has me wiggling uncomfortablely!
Ya, there's the potential for some tense moments ahead. Glad you are enjoying this little tale even if it is making you uncomfortable. And yes, I'm grinning! *g* Your comments are the best! Thank you!
So happy you like it! Thank you so much for letting us know. Warning: It may get worse before it gets better. Then again, with Teague...it may never get any better.
What a sweet imagination you had -- jumping into the book to save the characters, but don't do that here, okay? *points at Teague* Not a good idea, you know? *g*
Glad you are enjoying. Thanks for R&R (and to both of us! You are too kind!)
Boys will be boys, regardless of the era, and it would seem our Jackie has spent a good share of time exercising that right of passage.
The mood and mystery, plus the personal strife of the situation is so very well done. I 'd say you managed to put together at least a few words. Gone, but never forgotten, eh? Only have to oil those hinges just a little before they stop squeaking.
I fear I needed to use quite a bit of oil to get the hinges working on this one. It was a good two months in the making -- our schedules were no where near what one could call 'in sync' and much of this was handled days apart via email. On the bright side, not a lot of deadline pressure, I assure you!
Thanks for popping in and your comments. We love writing in this universe and it's fun to share with more than just each other. ♥
LOL!! I feel your pain!! You have no idea how many quarts of oil it took to get the rust off my hinges when I first started at this.... 30 years worth!
I'd say we're all the better for your efforts. Hang in there! We're all rootin' for ya!
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She’d coddle him and coo over his lip and admonish in the tender way she had of making him feel foolish, but unlike Teague, not stupid.
Jack's reaction to his father's presence in AWE are understandable in this light.
Very well written, and a real nail-biter. Looking forward to more!
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Glad you are enjoying. Thanks for R&R (and to both of us! You are too kind!)
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The mood and mystery, plus the personal strife of the situation is so very well done. I 'd say you managed to put together at least a few words. Gone, but never forgotten, eh? Only have to oil those hinges just a little before they stop squeaking.
Good stuff!
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Thanks for popping in and your comments. We love writing in this universe and it's fun to share with more than just each other. ♥
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I'd say we're all the better for your efforts. Hang in there! We're all rootin' for ya!
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