Comments | mary_marshall: The Art of (Not) Letting Go, Part 3

strwbrygrl77 in mary_marshall

The Art of (Not) Letting Go, Part 3

Feb 08, 2015 18:09

Snowflake for Greenstuff
Prompt: Why do you always want the one thing you can't have? Unrequited/requited love. M&M. ANGST

Summary: Three years after his marriage to Abigail, Marshall wonders why his marriage is still so complicated. Written from Marshall's POV.

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zzauthor: strwbrygrl77, hiatus fun: secret snowflake, fanfiction

Comments 6

lunar_penguin February 10 2015, 01:28:15 UTC

this is great! keep it coming!

strwbrygrl77 February 15 2015, 06:18:28 UTC

Lunar! Great to hear from you --

no worries, there's much more to come - keep reading! update will be up tomorrow.

kathiann February 15 2015, 00:37:34 UTC

I feel like she's ripping the heart out of his chest. This is painful. I don't even like her and I can feel the pain Marshall must be going through. This was incredibly well written.

strwbrygrl77 February 15 2015, 06:21:06 UTC

Aw, shucks. You make me blush. But I'm glad you're enjoying the angst. More is coming - it will get worse before it gets better.

greenstuff March 12 2015, 03:58:07 UTC

I'm sorry I am the absolutely worst for taking this long to get caught up. I really love this piece. :)

Nora is so very very precious. I usually am not a big fan of kids in fic because they are so hard to write well. You do her brilliantly. My heart is breaking for poor Marshall. To be there with Mary's family where he is so needed and belongs and to have to see and hear his wife slandering both him and mary, yet to be too honourable a man to ever lash back... *sadface*

strwbrygrl77 March 14 2015, 15:22:56 UTC

Yay! You're back -
Marshall's really being torn apart in this one, isn't he? And his harpy of a wife isn't helping things either. A teeny, tiny part of me manages to garner up some sympathy for Abby but then - I know what's coming up, and nope. It's gone.