Helping Each Other Fall in Love (1/?)

[maryj_annn]

Brendon was nine when he first met his true love. On his first day of 4th grade his teacher sat him right next to him. He was gorgeous, Brendon thought; perfect in every way.

Brendon could hardly control himself around him. When he would speak, Brendon would giggle. When he looked his way, giggle.  When he let a small smile slip onto his firm lips

Comments

[emorockkid]

I'll hate you if you let Ryan ask Brendon to shut up, stop giggling and stalking him with his eyes xD

This is cute, maybe a little too intense for 4th grade kids, but awesome and sweet anyways. I hope you'll go one with it soon

[maryj_annn]

Ohhh, you caught me!
But I assure you it's
done in a very nice
'ryan' way, of course.
I know it's alittle
intense :/. But when I
first wrote it I was
brendon, and Ryan was
my middle school 'sweatheart'.
It's alittle more dramatic
than when I was in 4th grade
but, mostly realistic. :D
Thank you, thank you, thank you,
for the comment, I appreciate
the feedback!
<33

[quixoticfangirl]

Aww, this is really cute =]

Can't wait for more!

[maryj_annn]

thanks. :D
I hope to post
more soon!

[melody_so_sweet]

:D awesome
can't wait to read more

[maryj_annn]

Thank you, thank you.
Your compliment is
very much appreciated!
Anddd more soon. :D

[snapthosefeet]

:D This was so adorable!

Oh, and I could beta for you if you'd like.

[maryj_annn]

Thank you so much!
Oh, really. That
would be great. I
really need a beta!

[snapthosefeet]

Yay! :D

how soon can i start lol

[maryj_annn]

I'll send you the next part as
soon as i finish like half of it or so.
So, prolly today or tomorrow, :D.