(FMA) Heart Shaped Gap (oneshot)

Feb 06, 2010 23:15

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cheru_chan February 6 2010, 17:28:28 UTC
nice chapter. a bit angsty for my taste, but you did a nice job portraying Roy and Al's true desires.

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masa_reforged February 7 2010, 01:06:29 UTC
ah, but you were still kind enough to leave a comment! thank you.

i'm especially glad you thought Roy and Al's true desires showed. i was afraid they were getting a little lost in the sadness sauce

angst is my original theme, so i have to indulge in it from time to time. will try to work more with smut in the near future...

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eve_n_furter February 9 2010, 00:27:59 UTC
The dress theme is bordering on being too funny, but it's also a heartbreaking image of how their relationship is making them smaller persons. I like it, even if their future seems bleak.

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masa_reforged February 9 2010, 12:58:35 UTC
ah. thank you. i have gotten quite a few comments about the cross-dressing being weird, or blowing people's minds, but yours is the first to hit on what i thought might be a problem, the mental images clash with the angst.

wah! "making them smaller persons". this perfectly captures exactly what i was going for in this story! (except i never could have so succinctly phrased it the way you did)

i love this comment. much food for though!

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