The dress theme is bordering on being too funny, but it's also a heartbreaking image of how their relationship is making them smaller persons. I like it, even if their future seems bleak.
ah. thank you. i have gotten quite a few comments about the cross-dressing being weird, or blowing people's minds, but yours is the first to hit on what i thought might be a problem, the mental images clash with the angst.
wah! "making them smaller persons". this perfectly captures exactly what i was going for in this story! (except i never could have so succinctly phrased it the way you did)
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i'm especially glad you thought Roy and Al's true desires showed. i was afraid they were getting a little lost in the sadness sauce
angst is my original theme, so i have to indulge in it from time to time. will try to work more with smut in the near future...
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wah! "making them smaller persons". this perfectly captures exactly what i was going for in this story! (except i never could have so succinctly phrased it the way you did)
i love this comment. much food for though!
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