“The One Where Prussia Finds his Kids and Germany has a Headache/Heartache”

Oct 19, 2009 02:32


(A/N): Written for Richard Roe and the Hetalia Sunshine Fanworks Exchange ( hetaliasunshine)

http://community.livejournal.com/hetaliasunshine/35447.html

I really hope my Prussia and Germany are not too crappy. First time every writing them.

Prompt was: “Prussia becomes attached to chicks and decides to keep many of them in his bedroom. Germany gets dragged into ( Read more... )

character : germany, character : prussia, prompt : chicks, axis powers hetalia

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mase992 October 20 2009, 02:32:41 UTC
Oh sorry! All done.

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kiwiyaa October 21 2009, 04:48:32 UTC
Psst. Pretty sure it should be "Ich liebe dich" or "Ich liebe Ihnen." Sie is nominative. ^^;

But D'AWWW, that was adorable!

They were both just perfectly in character and Italy's driving lessons ffff and he tried to feed them beer and awww. I can't even speak coherently, it was so fluffy cute.

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<3 mase992 October 29 2009, 02:03:49 UTC
Ack, thanks! I'll correct it! What difference is there from "dich" and "ihnen"?

Note to self: Never trust online dictionaries again.

XD Thanks!

Any form of Germany/Italy must exude fluff one way or another, heh. And thank you for enjoying this. I was reaqlly worried they were OOC or that I made Prussia look, well, stupid.;;

*hugs*

(Gosh, I love your Poland icon, btw)

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Re: <3 kiwiyaa October 29 2009, 02:58:42 UTC
Dich is informal, and Ihnen (capitalized) is formal. So it'd probably be dich, but knowing Germany... x)

Prussia's pretty much impervious to looking stupid, I think. What ridiculous thing hasn't he done? xD

(It's from a MAD... but I can't find it now. The Baltics ran a marathon around tables for him to change all the lightbulbs. <3)

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Re: <3 <3 x10 mase992 October 29 2009, 03:41:11 UTC
*Ihnen

Oh I understand now! Ich liebe dich it is then. Germany dropped the formalities for now, or maybe he was just tired XD.

You've got a point. We just have to look back at Oresama CD...

Hungary: If "awesome" has become the new "stupid" then he's set.

(I know which one it is <3. The song's extremely catchy XD.)

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thecupcakebat October 21 2009, 04:54:59 UTC
Awww, that was so cute! Prussia, the perfect father figure!

Such a cute little text message that Germany sent. Heehee~

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mase992 October 29 2009, 02:05:24 UTC
Isn't he? Germany should know ;).

He's that corny. Yes. I know it. Italy digs that ;D.

Thanks for reading!

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aoi_aka October 21 2009, 12:51:40 UTC
That was so cute and adorable! I just love Germany's text to Italy. This was all fluff and cute chicks. XD

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mase992 October 29 2009, 02:06:53 UTC
I've just found out that writing fluff for a change isn't that bad sometimes XD.

"Fluff and cute and chicks". Prussia is totally stealing that line, lol.

XD Thanks for reading!

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