Fuck (not serious)

[mashfanficchick]

I just realized--in relation to my previous post, about removing the drinking references in my "Ringer" fic--that it doesn't really matter: I have the feeling the fic itself won't work unless the reader has reason to believe that there's an excuse (namely, being half in the bag) for the character's thoughts to be as disorganized as they are.

Crap. I

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[silver_chipmunk]

Wish I knew the fandom, I'd offer to give it a look-over.

[mashfanficchick]

Thanks, SC. We'll see, maybe I'll show it to you at some point anyway. Just to get some general opinions. :-)