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[becky_h]

About You
Name: Becky
Age: 29
Location: EST
E-mail: bhoadley@gmail.com
AIM sn: BeckyWriting
Yahoo! sn: BoyblaiseZ
Other contacts:bhoadley on google-talk
What's the secret password:flobberworm
RP Experience : I started RPing in HP three, almost four, years ago with the most god awful gary-stu that has ever seen the internet -I improved with time,

Comments

[mask_mods]

Hi there!

We really liked your application for Remus, however we feel that it could benefit from a little more elaboration and some tweaking. We'd love it if you'd take the time to revise the app (editing this post is fine!). Specifically, we're looking for details which make Remus specifically your character, and not just an extension of canon!Remus. Remember, in the books we only see through Harry's eyes, so theres a lot that can be done with Remus whilst still remaining true and faithful to canon! We'd also love to hear how key events affected him, for example James and Lily's death, Sirius' supposed betrayal, etc. We'd also love to know what he REALLY thinks about various canon characters, including Harry...just have fun with it :)

[becky_h]

I'll elaborate and expand tonight and leave another reply letting you know it's been done. Thank you!

[becky_h]

Done.

[mask_mods]

[becky_h]

Thank you! I'll look forward to playing with you all.