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maskdemasque

The Confession

Dec 13, 2007 13:41

Title: The Confession
Rating: PG
Characters: Edgeworth and Wright
Time Period: After 1-4 but before 1-5
Words: Almost 1000

Thanks again to silverwind9 for edit help.

( Edgeworth stood up, running his hand through his hair. “I want to tell you something...” He made a few small steps forward. )

Comments 15

josshouse December 13 2007, 21:21:18 UTC

aww I wasn't disappointed at all! This is an angle on it that you don't much see. Edgeworth telling Wright he should join the party upstairs, instead of working? Nice. It would have been easy to mess this up and write them out of character, but it still felt correct to me, and that's impressive. Nice job :D

maskdemasque December 14 2007, 21:24:21 UTC

Glad not to have disappointed. I'm also glad you felt it was in-character. I was, frankly, a bit worried it wouldn't ring true. Thanks for the compliments.

maria_chan December 13 2007, 22:24:30 UTC

Awwww! That was so cute. Drunk Edgeworth is adorable...hahaha I bet he's going to be a little bitch when he wakes up with a hangover the next morning. No Phoenix, don't take him back upstairs to Gant! (he might get raeped!) you should show Edgey how to get home since you don't have a car either!!

Wonderful story it made me feel warm and fluffy :)

maskdemasque December 15 2007, 02:03:14 UTC

Phoenix had still more work to do, so he couldn't help poor Miles home. I'm glad to help you keep warm during the wintertime. <3

ha ha runninglonely December 13 2007, 23:54:29 UTC

That was pretty cute. I really liked it.

Re: ha ha maskdemasque December 14 2007, 21:24:51 UTC

:) Thank you.

croik December 14 2007, 02:45:21 UTC

I am always in favor of a drunk Miles <333 Very cute!

maskdemasque December 14 2007, 21:25:17 UTC

Of course YOU are. :P

;)

spinning_avia December 14 2007, 04:42:00 UTC

awww cute
poor drunk edgeworth
and OF COURSE it was gant giving him drinks...ahahahaha, i love gant...

maskdemasque December 15 2007, 02:10:38 UTC

Gant is surprisingly fun to include in any given story. I'd like to mess with him a bit more someday. <3