More of my writing...in fact the first marginally good piece I've written since CSSSA

[masked_angel]

Just fake it and everything will be okay. If you walk into a room and everybody turns and stares because you have some vile, green stain across the front of your white blouse that you somehow failed to notice the entire time you were dressing, doing your hair, putting on makeup, and driving to the cocktail party put on by your ex-boyfriend's best

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[alcarilinque]

Ooh, in one sentence.

:)

[hobbit_cogs]

I'm not sure what to think. I like it, I love the no period-ness because it lends it a train-of-thought quality that's wonderful for the narrative, I love the details, I love the partial self-reflection, but I've no idea what the point of this is. I think I missed something significant.....

[masked_angel]

There's not really a point...

[llama_n]

i love it.
not only because of the punctuation abstinence (though that obviously adds flavor)
you captured the social vibes from the party etc very well.

do i sense a little boy-from-DC-nostalgia?

[masked_angel]

Maybe a little...also a bit of longing for a certain Pleasantonian boy. All-in-all, I really really want a boy.

[spazmatic_spork]

Amen to that. Me too.

[llama_n]

oy.. me too

[o_invertedworld]

oi, me 3