re: chorus lyrics... hmmmm I really want/need to read it in context to give you full accurate review, because as of now I feel like I'm reading something equivalent to a garden salad-- delicious little pieces all tossed together but with nothing to really tie it to become one thing. :/
I do like that it's blank verse. I <3 music in blank verse. At least, this particular snippet is. I will say the meter is a bit hard to make out, but it might be because of the way YOU have the meter and rhythm worked out on el piano. :D
Hah... I have a friend that has recordings of her on her itunes. xD
OH. SO. GG wants to hear more masciita recordings... yes, si, oui, da, hai, -ASL for yes-, aaaand UH I dunno any other ways to say yes. XD Like... did Mascii ever finish her music for the song I wrote a while back? XD It was coming along so well! ^_^
I knoooow what I'm making you for navidaaaad. :D :D :D :D
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I do like that it's blank verse. I <3 music in blank verse. At least, this particular snippet is. I will say the meter is a bit hard to make out, but it might be because of the way YOU have the meter and rhythm worked out on el piano. :D
Hah... I have a friend that has recordings of her on her itunes. xD
OH. SO. GG wants to hear more masciita recordings... yes, si, oui, da, hai, -ASL for yes-, aaaand UH I dunno any other ways to say yes. XD Like... did Mascii ever finish her music for the song I wrote a while back? XD It was coming along so well! ^_^
I knoooow what I'm making you for navidaaaad. :D :D :D :D
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