of book stores and word vomit (1/1)

[maskyouwear]

of book stores and word vomit (nc-17) by holdmetightx
jaejoong/yoochun (yunho/changmin, bff!junsu/yoochun ), 5335 words.
sigh, blame it all on a certain someone and the pictures of jaejoong with his fringe pinned back. with each fic i’m just proving that angst is not a word in my dictionary... and that i like to muscle my otp into everything

Comments

[anglosaxons]

DSFBSDBNDBAERBDFB OMG NATASHA. OMG. BRB READING. ;_;

....now i have to finish mine sdfbiopndssdga

also, HOW IS EVERYTHING ALWAYS MY FAULT? >:| i h8 u

edit:
DFBADPOBNASDBSDHNBPSDGOAM! NHPOGMASD! OMG I CAN'T EVEN BREATHE ;_;

i like how you snuck your ~homin in there, lmfao. ♥
your chun is so perfect and full of fail and this was so, so good and i love you and gapomngmonn OMG

your changmin is also perfectly snarky and wonderful and i love your junsu :( just, the relationships in this are so great. aish.

i laughed out loud at the kissing the air out of the lungs part, because, you know.. "kissed the air out of Yoochun's legs" sbpmnd lmfao idek, i can't be coherent about this.

LOVE. ♥

now i really need to finish mine. i will finish it tonight! ;_; brb, slaving over jaechun fic.

edit again:
i forgot to mention that we are totally brain twins, you'll see why when you read my fic lmao.

[holdmetightx]

YOU BROUGHT ME INTO THIS FANDOM, YOU CAN TAKE RESPONSIBILITY OF EVERYTHING. lmao >:]

well if your otp's going to be in there, so is mine. :D

haahahahahasjkeasjaseopkaslasase.

I HAVE NOTHING ELSE TO SAY, SANK YUU VERY MUSH~

it's because we're made to beeeeeeee.

[anglosaxons]

THIS IS TRUE. D: UNFAIR, BUT TRUE.

fair. (and i kind of love homin so it's okay)

LMAO um, idk how to say you're welcome in engrish D; YOU AH WERCOME? lmfao sfbiopnsfb ugh my brain is broken.

obviouslyyyyyyyy.

[holdmetightx]

mfiosjwraioeeja thank you :D

[happy_gogogo]

AH OMO I LOVED THIS!

It was sweet and hot and I laughed at Changmin and Junsu's smart remarks.

Great job!

[holdmetightx]

heeeee thank you :D

[candielover93]

lmaoo, dyiing. omgg, that was hilarious ♥ i love your yoochun. and jaejoong. and changmin. and junsu. i would love your yunho, but there wasn't enough screen time for him to really grow on me, lol.

i don't even read jaechun or homin, but they really worked in this. especially yoochun's fail, rofl. the homin's PDA was so unlike what i would write them as, haha. they seem more of the "strong, silent" type, but snark!changmin and mushy, in love!yunho was just asldfjasdlfa! i love the little texts between junsu and yoochun. junsu has a different kind of snark from changmin, and it's so like him, lol. i love your characterizations, period. XD;

and you managed to put in canon! a;sldjalsdfa! *more keysmash*

this was not ridiculous :| i am totally memming this. it's that good. you better write more, natasha!

[holdmetightx]

I ALWAYS NEGLECT YUNHO, what is wrong with me D: he's even the other half of my otp, idk how this happens lmao. D:

ahhh, thankyouthankyouthankyou :D

[ruinedempires]

Yunho mumbles something incoherent and Yoochun looks up from his shoulder, “what was that?”

“Sorry,” he says and wipes at the side of his mouth, “word vomit.”

amazing and as difficult as it was to pinpoint when i fell for ass over teakettle for you, i would say it was around here! there are approximately 5k or so things i love about this fic. it's tender and sweet, humorous and just plain good! your foray into dbsk was a success. i invite you to write more, for your own sake of course. ;)

[holdmetightx]

i actually made myself lol with that part D: haha. THANK YOU :D