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us college kids (1/1)

Jan 06, 2009 20:44

us college kids (college au, r) by holdmetightx
yunho/changmin (junsu/hyukjae), 6,981 words.
i’m back with more fail, just bear in mind that i nearly completely deleted this halfway through writing it. also, thank you for the amazing response on my jaechun fic (‘:
warnings: sex, more fail yoochun and general ridiculousness like everything i write.

( ’Thought you said you loved a challenge.’ Changmin snorts from the other side of the table and Jaejoong fixes his glare on him instead.

‘I said I loved a challenge, not that I loved the challenged.’ )

fandom: dong bang shin ki, pairing: yunho/changmin, verse: college, !one-shot

Comments 75

yuxo January 6 2009, 22:43:13 UTC

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hang on, hang on, sobbing my face off right now be back with extremely incoherent comment for you, okay?

waefhpoaksjldfklasdjf SOBS FUCKING SOBS AND DIES IDEK IDEK THAT WAS ASLDJFLASKDFJPWOEIJAPSLKDJF SOBS SOBS SOBS ASDLFKJASDFKJ

♥ sldkfjdsfj brb

yuxo January 6 2009, 23:13:19 UTC

Wea;lskjdfoweijasldkjasldjf I apologize in advance for the…stupidity of the following comment, but I really believe this needs to be done because. Because. …because I will explode of happy times otherwise. :’DDDDD sobs idek anymore okay let me start with this fail overview thing I always seem to do. I love them all. I cannot even tell you how in love with Jaejoong I am. Jaejae is just…perfect. He’s a bitch and such a best friend I’m completely jealous of Changmin. And he’s such…a…asdflkajdfskja idek!! Perfect!! And Yoochun made me lol and :’3 for so long and he’s just so cute and Junsu and hyukjae lol idek I don’t even ship hyuksu romantically and I thought this was perfect. And Changmin and Changmin. Oh I don’t even know what to say to you. I don’t know what you EXPECT me to say to you because…oh my lord I haven’t read a homin fic like this in a while and it makes me so warm and fluffy inside and I love it so much I have no coherent words. Asldfjewpajsklfjlsdfj their interactions are so light-hearted, and when Changmin fucks up as he ( ... )

yuxo January 6 2009, 23:14:38 UTC

“Bonjour!” He says in possibly the worst French accent Changmin has ever heard, “sap sari wah yoh!”

“Okay, that’s enough beer for you tonight, Chun.” Jaejoong says, pulling away the glass and patting Yoochun’s head.

“Sap sari wah yoh!” Yoochun repeats, flinging a hand out and spilling Jaejoong’s drink everywhere.

“What does that even mean?” Jaejoong fixes him with a glare and Yoochun doesn’t answer, just pulls a face and makes grabby hands at his beer. Jaejoong sighs.

“Thought you said you loved a challenge.” Changmin snorts from the other side of the table and Jaejoong fixes his glare on him instead.

“I said I loved a challenge, not that I loved the challenged. “

why is that quote so long. :l anyway, I have this to say to you. LOLLLLLLLASLDFKJWEPOAIJFDSKLJF HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA I THINK I RUPTURED SOMETIHNG SADLKJFASDKJ HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA STOP THIS JUST STOP THIS DIES

It’s when Yunho starts to lean, lips parted and eyes half-lidded that Changmin realizes what he’s doing and turns his head, too afraid and in ( ... )

yuxo January 6 2009, 23:17:17 UTC

...this time, i'm not going to fail on the html. -_-;;

Okay, so that’s it with the quotes but that certainly isn’t it for me rambling, unfortunately for you. :’DDDDD going back and finding all these quotes again, I fell in love with it all over again!! It is so sweet and cute and really funny and just so…truthful with the feelings, I don’t know what to say to you. You made my heart lighter and now I’m typing all this with a huge smile on my face!! the best thing to come home to after a really long day at uni dies. ;3;

You may not like what you write but I know that for however little it counts, I love it!! Almost 7000 words!!!!!!! How do you do it so well!? Nothing dragged and it was all just such a joy to read alsdkfjlaskdjfslkdfj sobs.

…okay, dies, this is nearing the end of page 4 on MS word now…so uh, I will…stp. :’D

I love this so much, and I love you for writing it, thank you for sharing something so wonderful!! I really loved it, really did. :3333! Now you should write me even more homin! :D

:3 :D

♥2348324 apologies for ( ... )

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awindyday January 6 2009, 23:52:22 UTC

i'm adding this to my mems.
loveddddd it.♥

holdmetightx January 7 2009, 07:50:22 UTC

aww thank you :D

anyappellation January 6 2009, 23:53:52 UTC

WAHHH~ I love your humor. It is of the awesome :DDDD Tthis, “I said I loved a challenge, not that I loved the challenged. “ made me LOL literally. heh.

Changmin being all romantic is cute, and Yunho, too. And Jaejoong is love for bringing them together. slkdfj the smut doesn't hurt either. Awesome fic. :)

holdmetightx January 7 2009, 07:51:16 UTC

haha, that is probably my favourite line too. oh jae. thank you! (:

sunev789 January 7 2009, 00:00:23 UTC

I read this, like, an hour ago...
& still have nothing intelligent or coherent to say about this...
So...
ADKSJI;SDIKISA;D I LOVE IT. SOBS D:
It made me laugh loads & totally fall head over heels for your characterization of the boys. ♥
God~ *mems*
<3333

holdmetightx January 7 2009, 07:51:44 UTC

jmiofsdjddaklsjeeas thank you. :DD

thevirginia January 7 2009, 01:03:10 UTC

This was seriously so adorable to read; it brought a smile to my face. I love how it was fluffy but humorous (and hyuksu was all kinds of cute, even though they only made small appearances :D). Your Jaejoong was so amusing, I love it when people make him a happy person because seriously, that man is so good for laughs (like, “Junsu’s already living with someone, sorry.”
DIESSSSSSSS).

ps: “I’m decided whether I should kiss you or not.” Yunho says after // decided -> deciding?

holdmetightx January 7 2009, 07:55:41 UTC

haha aww thank you :D

p.s klsdjaioe fixed it. thank you for pointing it out :D