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Jun 07, 2004 00:52

People were sad. They formed a village and called it Happy Happy. Everything was painted blue: the houses, the cows, their clothes dyed blue. All was sweetness and lights until he saw a vision of children, dancing outside a chimney, rain beneath a silk curtain. From that point on Mr. Carpainter was a saint, a prophet, a messenger of God. His ( Read more... )

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hobopoet June 7 2004, 14:49:07 UTC
Are you saying that Mr. Carpenter was unable to take away the poeple's blue?

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chefkatsuya June 7 2004, 15:16:16 UTC
Heh... I especially enjoyed this one.

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shykid June 7 2004, 15:42:16 UTC
Very nice Earthbound reference.

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missie_krista June 7 2004, 18:08:27 UTC
Beautiful, absolutely gorgeous. Typical religion, eh?

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honbear684_luba June 7 2004, 19:50:51 UTC
I love how you incorporated that blue ties in with sadness.... beautiful piece of work. Have you ever won a writing contest or had your things published? Please write back.. I'm sure your readers would love to hear from the writer behind the pseudoname.

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