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Aug 27, 2004 16:10


         The night was dreary and young the way that he preferred it to be. For the centuries that he had roamed this earth he had discovered this one thing; dreary weather was more fitting for these incompetent mortals. The earth, which in his time had been beautiful and abundant with the simple pleasures of nature that filled Gavin Admar’s bleak ( Read more... )

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cheap_fantasy August 28 2004, 11:03:27 UTC
you write so well........you are very descriptive and Vivica is/was a bitch lol i enjoyed it *hugs* when you finish it and it's published i'll buy it ; D i'm a big talker but yea you should definately do something with your writing.

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justgotwicked7 August 29 2004, 15:18:26 UTC
Mmmm, I really like how descriptive you are with characters. It's so long for one reading though, chaptering would be nice ^_^ Need's some publishing somehow :p

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