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Sep 26, 2004 02:00

I think of you, in my dreams,
When night winds encircle me,
The soft darkness creeping in,
Now in love, with swelling heart,
In your arms, for so long I’ve missed.Just a little bit of a poem which I've yet to complete. Have you ever met someone where just the slightest touch of their skin sent every nerve ending in you humming, just the sight of ( Read more... )

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cheap_fantasy September 26 2004, 13:40:03 UTC
well i have the pathetic belief in fate as well so i know what youre talking about. that poem or part of poem (whatever) is nice. i like this line:"Now in love, with swelling heart," i really like how the heart is used as a metaphor for love. i'd like to say i love someone with all my brain because feelings come from nerves that are triggered by the brain but that would just make me sound really weird so i dont say it lol anyway...yea those anxious feelings that something is about to happen are always so damn suspenseful because you just wait and wait. i hope that person or emotion comes to you soon my little poet *hugs* ; )

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