the color of its countries, 2/?
anonymous
March 5 2011, 23:43:15 UTC
She ditched Tali and Kasumi, shooed away the solicitous asari proprietress, and browsed for a bit. She discarded most of the available options out of hand. Sexy outfits designed for humans emphasized areas of the body that did pretty much nothing for Garrus, who was far more interested in the bones at her wrists and ankles (and the back of her neck, and . . . ) than in her jigglier bits. Not that he objected to the jiggly bits, but he wasn’t any more fond of them than, say, her ears
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Re: the color of its countries, 2/?
anonymous
March 6 2011, 06:01:26 UTC
Not the OP but I am loving this so far. Props especially go for pointing out that what would be attractive to human standards may not hold true for the turian side of things. Eagerly anticipating more!
Re: the color of its countries, 2/?
anonymous
March 6 2011, 11:09:05 UTC
This is so INTERESTING. Of course Garrus would be all about her bony parts! And obviously I can see Tali being all "TOO MUCH INFORMATION" in response to Kasumi's gossiping. Well done, anon! If the leadup is this good, I can't wait to see where it goes later~
Re: the color of its countries, 2/?
anonymous
March 6 2011, 22:34:45 UTC
Still not the OP, but I am absolutely loving this. I really love the idea of finding things to be attracted to in a different species, even if it's something different than usual. Although, I think collarbones are pretty sexy anyway, but you know.
I also find the whole concept of FemShep hanging out with 'the girls' so awesome. Tali and Kasumi are never not lovable, and you've got everybody so nicely in-character so far. I really hope you continue, and terrific work so far!
Re: the color of its countries, 2/?
anonymous
March 7 2011, 02:23:12 UTC
Not OP but loving this so far. You're doing great at keeping in-character so far and the little banters are just great. Can't wait to see what else becomes of this.
I'm so glad you're all enjoying this! I've been working on the next part while fighting the Killer Death Flu of Doom, but have no fear, I haven't forgotten and will update very soon. :D
the color of its countries, 4/?
anonymous
March 13 2011, 00:42:08 UTC
They didn't talk much for a while after that. She mapped the hide of his plates, like warm leather under her fingertips, and bit at the tip of his keelbone just to feel the reverberations of his growl rising up out of his chest and into her hands. Garrus' tongue traced the curves of her ear with an agonizing slowness that left her squirming astride his thighs. He finished by catching her earlobe between the harder, beaklike plates of his mouth-something between a nip and a kiss-and then murmured in her ear, "What's the occasion
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the color of its countries, 5/?
anonymous
March 13 2011, 00:46:05 UTC
She dipped her fingertips into the orange, the closest she could come to the rusty color of the Normandy's highlight paint job, and swept it along the underside of one mandible, just beneath the blue of his facial markings. She moved to dip her fingers back in the orange and repeat on the other side, but Garrus was faster: he dipped a forefinger in the green (the same shade as her armor, nearly) and swept it along her collarbones
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Please continue :)
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...moar plz
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I also find the whole concept of FemShep hanging out with 'the girls' so awesome. Tali and Kasumi are never not lovable, and you've got everybody so nicely in-character so far. I really hope you continue, and terrific work so far!
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in-character so far and the little banters are just great.
Can't wait to see what else becomes of this.
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