Forgive me? 1/?
anonymous
March 18 2012, 00:22:38 UTC
Ok, I have never written fic before,so please forgive the mistakes~and hopefully I'm submitting this right!Also, I've never actually seen the control ending~so I took some weird liberties with it
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Re: Forgive me? 5/?
anonymous
March 19 2012, 08:34:08 UTC
“They told me you died,” Garrus raises his head again at Shepard’s voice, visor spinning from his clumsy reconstructed talons to clatter to the street. “W..when the reaper beam hit, they told me you died….that’s why I didn’t look for you. How did this happen, Garrus? How could this have happened?!” Shepard realises her voice has risen sharply, tense with a rising hysteria that chokes in her throat
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Re: Forgive me? 5B/?
anonymous
March 19 2012, 19:46:06 UTC
IMHO it's the worst because you make a decision for anyone else where you really can't estimate the outcome. There are worse things than death, and for some? most? that would be it. Me, I'd not mind so much, but I couldn't force that on anyone else.
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The tears. They won't stop. D:
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yeah. Not going to choose that one either. Well written, anon, very well written.
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just my opinion, of course.
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... yeah, okay, I am crying.
This hurts, a!a. This hurts a lot. Which means you're doing it right.
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which strangely means i want more...
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