FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (1/?)
anonymous
June 1 2012, 08:38:17 UTC
this...is going to be a lot of fun. ;D
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"Shepard."
"Huh."
"Shepard." Liara stood at the landing to the commander's quarters with her arms folded, slowly inching her way back toward the exit in the hope that the human would take the hint and follow suit. "We're going to be late."
Commander Shepard was crouched on the floor of her cabin, peering underneath her bed. "No we won't. I set all my clocks forward fifteen minutes. It keeps me...vigilant."
Liara's eyes widened for a moment. "Actually, I...set the clocks back," she admitted timidly, biting her lip apologetically when Shepard whipped her head over her shoulder with an exaggerated look of betrayal.
"It doesn't make any sense!" Liara sputtered. "How does it help you stay vigilant if you already know they're running fast
( ... )
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (3/?)
anonymous
June 2 2012, 06:05:56 UTC
OP, your enthusiasm is adorable. It makes me want to fill prompts for you, too.
A!A, your story so far has floated through my mind more than once today. Thank you for that. The imagery of a teased Liara and an insatiable Shepard is ... priceless.
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (3/?)
anonymous
June 2 2012, 18:40:00 UTC
hahaha a!a totally agrees with this anon. OP, you are an absolute sweetheart and as soon as I secure some hangover chow and stumble back to my apartment, I'll be all over this. ;b
FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 10:41:26 UTC
If the bottom floor of the club was less noisy than the one above, it was by a debatable margin.
Shepard and Liara didn't have any trouble locating the rest of the group--the Normandy's crew took up three tables and spilled over onto a fourth. The commander found two adjacent chairs and pulled them out, gesturing for Liara to sit as she collapsed into her own seat
( ... )
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 15:10:18 UTC
My fucking god.
Climbed out of bed. Walked to the computer. Read this. Melted. Crawled back into bed.
I can feel how much you want this.
I want this too. I need this.
Rrrrrrrrrr.
I decide when you get what you want. I decide when you come.
asdhekhfkjefh
This ... yeah. I wish I could write half as good as you. I wish I'd written my orgasm-denial scene as perfectly as this. More, please, before I start feeling like Liara.
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 4 2012, 07:53:32 UTC
what!! I'm guessing you are part of the pg. 22 dynamic duo because that's the only other orgasm denial scene I think I've seen recently??
if so--your writing is fucking fantastic! both of you guys are crazy talented. the collab is sssssmokin' hot, perfectly paced, and watching you banter back and forth is super charming and hilarious.
and if that's not you and that's not the fill you're talkin about, then--umm, link plz :B
aaand thank you for your kind words ;D trying to gauge the quality of my own writing is kind of like trying to tickle myself, so I appreciate feedback that lets me know when I'm successful. ;b
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 4 2012, 14:49:10 UTC
Yeah, I'm the second author there, but I'm totally serious. It's really incredible how you're able to create an unbearably sexy scene without relying on inner monologue. Their actions really show everything they're feeling. That's a talent I wish that I had. I'm already emo about your being busy these next few days!
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 16:59:17 UTC
.... I feel like I just had my hair blown back by a hot hairdryer, if that makes any sense. @_@
Orgasm denial usually isn't at the top of my (admittedly long) list of kinks - although I'll admit that it is on there - so I typically end up focusing on other things, but damn if you haven't inspired me a bit with this. I might have to address this newfound fascination in some of my own fills.
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 19:00:17 UTC
Well gawrsh people, you're making this OP!anon feel so darn self-conscious about gushing over this hawtness... *squirms and scuffs at the ground with the tip of her shoe, all blushy and coy* I can't help it, it just makes me feel so happy to read something so damn great, inspired by one of my ideas I can't write myself! The least I can do is show my appreciation to the best of my abilities, by gushing like a crazy person.
...Here's some more gushing, because some is definitely needed. First things first, oh my GOD. The image of Shepard just outright fucking Liara under the table in front of all those people...!!! I had trouble breathing after reading that, so thanks a!a for almost killing me. WITH SEXINESS. What a way to go. Nnnnngargh. Seriously. I can't stress the hotness of that, I just... can't.
Poor, POOR Liara. I know I'm an evil sadist for enjoying how much sexy torture she's going through, but I can't help it! I adore the idea of a woman being totally frustrated and teased to the point of breaking by her lover, all aching
( ... )
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 19:52:02 UTC
Ack, I'm sorry OP, I didn't mean to make you self-conscious. :( My intent was to compliment you! I'd kill for comments like this on my stuff. I'll shut up now (apart from saying I desperately agree with said gushing).
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 4 2012, 08:38:35 UTC
OP, I'm your #1 fan c: really can't tell you how gratifying it is to get this kind of feedback. this is why I love this group of anons so much--I feel like I live in a gated community or something. ;b the enthusiasm and encouragement and support and inside jokes etc etc are just tremendous. warm and fuzzies.
I kinda strayed a bit from the prompt in the update I posted earlier but I promise it'll get back on track soon!
Re: FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (4/?)
anonymous
June 4 2012, 14:55:54 UTC
Ooh, I have a fan? Gee, I feel like a celebrity now! And I guess I can survive a few sweet comments about my silly gushing. And then just keep gushing some more because gah, this fill is beyond amazing. BEYOND, I SAY!
You strayed from the prompt? *checks* Huh, I guess you did, a tiny bit? ...Dahlin', if your straying ends up with Liara struggling to keep her mouth shut and not inform everyone at the table with her moans that Shepard just brought her to a delicious orgams, right there, right then, in front of them all... You can keep straying all the fuck you want and I'll be there like the sad, pathetic fangirl I am and just beg for more, on my hands and knees, always ready and willing and...
Wait, that metaphor went somewhere totally wrong there. My apologies, though I blame you, a!a. The sexiness and hotness of this fill just keep melting my brain into a puddle of blissed out goo. I hope you're happy now, melting brains and killing me with sexiness. Shame on you. Shaaaaaaame.
FemShep/Liara - Fair Warning (5/?)
anonymous
June 3 2012, 23:24:48 UTC
Liara started at the words, taken aback, but undeniably aroused as she let her hips rock forward. Shepard turned away again, chatting and gesturing animatedly with her left hand while the other worked deftly away underneath the table, fucking Liara with controlled urgency
( ... )
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"Shepard."
"Huh."
"Shepard." Liara stood at the landing to the commander's quarters with her arms folded, slowly inching her way back toward the exit in the hope that the human would take the hint and follow suit. "We're going to be late."
Commander Shepard was crouched on the floor of her cabin, peering underneath her bed. "No we won't. I set all my clocks forward fifteen minutes. It keeps me...vigilant."
Liara's eyes widened for a moment. "Actually, I...set the clocks back," she admitted timidly, biting her lip apologetically when Shepard whipped her head over her shoulder with an exaggerated look of betrayal.
"It doesn't make any sense!" Liara sputtered. "How does it help you stay vigilant if you already know they're running fast ( ... )
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A!A, your story so far has floated through my mind more than once today. Thank you for that. The imagery of a teased Liara and an insatiable Shepard is ... priceless.
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Oh well. It'll be worth it when I see an update!
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Shepard and Liara didn't have any trouble locating the rest of the group--the Normandy's crew took up three tables and spilled over onto a fourth. The commander found two adjacent chairs and pulled them out, gesturing for Liara to sit as she collapsed into her own seat ( ... )
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Excuse me while I fan myself.
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Climbed out of bed. Walked to the computer. Read this. Melted. Crawled back into bed.
I can feel how much you want this.
I want this too. I need this.
Rrrrrrrrrr.
I decide when you get what you want. I decide when you come.
asdhekhfkjefh
This ... yeah. I wish I could write half as good as you. I wish I'd written my orgasm-denial scene as perfectly as this. More, please, before I start feeling like Liara.
(I can't wait to see the OP's reaction to this.)
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if so--your writing is fucking fantastic! both of you guys are crazy talented. the collab is sssssmokin' hot, perfectly paced, and watching you banter back and forth is super charming and hilarious.
and if that's not you and that's not the fill you're talkin about, then--umm, link plz :B
aaand thank you for your kind words ;D trying to gauge the quality of my own writing is kind of like trying to tickle myself, so I appreciate feedback that lets me know when I'm successful. ;b
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Orgasm denial usually isn't at the top of my (admittedly long) list of kinks - although I'll admit that it is on there - so I typically end up focusing on other things, but damn if you haven't inspired me a bit with this. I might have to address this newfound fascination in some of my own fills.
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...Here's some more gushing, because some is definitely needed. First things first, oh my GOD. The image of Shepard just outright fucking Liara under the table in front of all those people...!!! I had trouble breathing after reading that, so thanks a!a for almost killing me. WITH SEXINESS. What a way to go. Nnnnngargh. Seriously. I can't stress the hotness of that, I just... can't.
Poor, POOR Liara. I know I'm an evil sadist for enjoying how much sexy torture she's going through, but I can't help it! I adore the idea of a woman being totally frustrated and teased to the point of breaking by her lover, all aching ( ... )
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I kinda strayed a bit from the prompt in the update I posted earlier but I promise it'll get back on track soon!
p.s. sorry for almost killing you :c !!!!!
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You strayed from the prompt? *checks* Huh, I guess you did, a tiny bit? ...Dahlin', if your straying ends up with Liara struggling to keep her mouth shut and not inform everyone at the table with her moans that Shepard just brought her to a delicious orgams, right there, right then, in front of them all... You can keep straying all the fuck you want and I'll be there like the sad, pathetic fangirl I am and just beg for more, on my hands and knees, always ready and willing and...
Wait, that metaphor went somewhere totally wrong there. My apologies, though I blame you, a!a. The sexiness and hotness of this fill just keep melting my brain into a puddle of blissed out goo. I hope you're happy now, melting brains and killing me with sexiness. Shame on you. Shaaaaaaame.
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Holy shit A!A, that was hot!
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