Come Home - 2/?
anonymous
July 31 2012, 03:45:32 UTC
Twenty minutes later, he still hasn't moved. Shepard's not in the habit of taking long showers, and this one's four times too long. He rises, makes his way upstairs and stops by the bathroom door. He's about to knock, but he pauses, his knuckles hovering over the surface as he considers his options
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Come Home - 3/?
anonymous
July 31 2012, 03:46:50 UTC
"Breathe," he whispers against her skin, and so she does, her chest rising and falling in time with the pressure of his tongue against the outside of her folds. She tastes salty, though the water disguises the usual tangy aftertaste. One hand brings one thigh up to hook over his shoulder, exposing her a little more, but it's not enough. He nods his head upward toward the little shelf meant for bottles, and she understands instantly
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Come Home - 4/?
anonymous
July 31 2012, 03:48:32 UTC
He gives her less time to regain her composure this time, because now he's completely fired up with the same passion that's singing through her veins. When her eyelids lift, her irises are reflecting the same fire as his, and that's all the confirmation he needs, as he grips her arms and turns her around until her ass is flush against his pelvis. One arm wraps around her waist and lifts her off her feet, and it's no easy feat because she's half-metal inside. Before she can say otherwise, her hips are pushing into the edge of the bathroom counter, and he's leaving red marks with his teeth along whatever skin he can find purchase on. All through his rush, he doesn't notice the way her spine stiffens when she looks straight forward
( ... )
Re: Come Home - 5/5
anonymous
July 31 2012, 04:15:54 UTC
Wow. This anon read the prompt and moved on when it was prompted. But I figured, 'hey, why not?' when this popped up in my inbox. And wow. So fantastically wonderful, A!A. So wonderful I can't find the words to express my awe of this. Amazing.
Re: Come Home - 5/5
anonymous
July 31 2012, 05:00:33 UTC
A!A is delighted beyond words that you found this so amazing. I'm so happy that you enjoyed it and found it noteworthy enough to leave such a nice comment on it :)
Re: Come Home - 5/5
anonymous
July 31 2012, 05:15:58 UTC
OP here: Omigod, A!A, omigod! This fill was so fantastically perfect! Wonderful and tender, heartrending and sweet. Thank you so, so much. I'm at a loss for words. It's just that, well, perfect!
Re: Come Home - 5/5
anonymous
July 31 2012, 05:41:58 UTC
OP! I'm so so so so SO happy you liked it! I read your review over on FFN and don't worry about the stress, I'm a little overemotional :) I'm just delighted that you like it so much, I was so worries about getting it just right, and it's such a relief to hear that I hit the spot :)
Long prompt is long. I can't write anything but fluff, so I'm posting this in hopes someone else can do it justice ( ... )
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Very well done.
Not OP.
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1. This whole fill made me ache. It was so heartbreakingly tender and I loved every moment of it.
2. So gonna have sex in front of a mirror.
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