The Gift 1/1
anonymous
February 13 2013, 09:49:27 UTC
Dear OP, my deepest apologies at how long it has been. Initially in the gap between proposing the idea and having it OKed I lost track of what I had wanted to do, then I lost the paper I had written my ideas on entirely... I've sat with this all night determined to finish it and I think it came out alright
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Re: The Gift 1/1
anonymous
February 16 2013, 02:25:52 UTC
This is beautiful. My only complaint is I would have like to see just a little bit of interation between Kolyat and especially Falare, since she's quite rare on the meme.
Oh A!A is completely in agreement with you- I should have had them at least speak but I just didn't feel comfortable writing them because I don't feel like I know them at all. I pretty much fell down on 90% of the prompt and only did the Samara (and Thane) and grandbabies bit ^^;; It definately would have been stronger if the parents had been involved. I feel somewhat less guilty about this because OP oked the idea.
If somebody who knows Falare and/or Kolyat better wants to take the little basis I built here and run with it feel free, just link so we can read it ^^
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Captcha: Ebenezer
No joke. It's right there.
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If somebody who knows Falare and/or Kolyat better wants to take the little basis I built here and run with it feel free, just link so we can read it ^^
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If I wasn't working on, like, 3 other stories. Maybe in the future...
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