First: outstanding outstanding prompt. It just made so much sense that I slapped my forehead and shook my head in disbelief at how great and fresh a pairing it was and how ridiculous that no one had explored this relationship before, to my knowledge. I hope someone else takes notice of this as well and does the prompt more justice. And speaking of justice, if you would like to give me some sort of handle, I do want to give you credit for the idea for when I post this on FF at some point after I let it stew in my head a bit longer.
And second: sorry again.
I tried. I really did. And it was going so well, too! It was going to be a heartwarming fic., full of hugs and cuddles and… and at some point I had a bad cookie. You know, the too-crunchy kind that kind of cuts your mouth? Yeah.
Ima is Hebrew for mother, or so Google tells me.
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ima
Shh. Don’t cry, honey. It’s okay now, mommy’s here. Come here… up we go.
…
See? It’s not so bad. Right?
…
That’s right. You’re such a good girl. Oh, my brave little-Jack
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Re: ima OP here.
anonymous
October 28 2013, 05:05:44 UTC
I know there's about zero chance, but I implore you AA to branch off into the original heart-warming concept both because coaxing some kind of happier ending out of Jack and Samara would be heavenly, and because it'd also be such a pleasure to read more of them from your pen. <3.
This is just a lovely mood/character piece, A!A. Heartbreaking in the best way. You've done justice to these two awesome characters who don't get enough love from the fandom. Thanks so much for sharing.
This is so intelligent, beautiful, and bittersweet, especially the last two paragraphs. You captured their two characters and how they might bond (and why that bond might fail) so well. I was surprised to be so moved by this, but I was. Great job, anon.
First: outstanding outstanding prompt. It just made so much sense that I slapped my forehead and shook my head in disbelief at how great and fresh a pairing it was and how ridiculous that no one had explored this relationship before, to my knowledge. I hope someone else takes notice of this as well and does the prompt more justice. And speaking of justice, if you would like to give me some sort of handle, I do want to give you credit for the idea for when I post this on FF at some point after I let it stew in my head a bit longer.
And second: sorry again.
I tried. I really did. And it was going so well, too! It was going to be a heartwarming fic., full of hugs and cuddles and… and at some point I had a bad cookie. You know, the too-crunchy kind that kind of cuts your mouth? Yeah.
Ima is Hebrew for mother, or so Google tells me.
~
ima
Shh. Don’t cry, honey. It’s okay now, mommy’s here. Come here… up we go.
…
See? It’s not so bad. Right?
…
That’s right. You’re such a good girl. Oh, my brave little-Jack ( ... )
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