Journal of the Plague Days, 1/4
anonymous
August 26 2012, 04:50:20 UTC
Thought this was a neat prompt and scribbled this tonight. Hope it makes sense!She hadn’t been on Omega long when she met him. She was celebrating her first real paycheck, out at the club. The place was hopping, and she was waiting in a long line at the bar
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Re: Journal of the Plague Days, 2/4
anonymous
August 26 2012, 04:51:44 UTC
The volus who ran the store was perched on a lift behind the counter. “I’m sorry,” he said loudly and slowly to the batarian standing in front of him, “but I don’t have what you’re looking for
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Re: Journal of the Plague Days, 4/4
anonymous
August 26 2012, 04:54:08 UTC
She glared back over her shoulder. “Yeah. I’m dating a turian. What’s it to you? Damn it,” she grumbled. He was almost totally limp, and it was tricky to keep him propped up and get the cough syrup into his mouth without it running out between his teeth
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Re: Journal of the Plague Days, 4/4
anonymous
August 26 2012, 06:33:33 UTC
[not OP] This is so awesome, I love it. I'm just imagining Shep sending awkward "well my turian says/does this, does that mean he wants me too?" questions to this poor lady and the lady being like "omg Shep wants my advice on relationships? wtf?!"
Re: Journal of the Plague Days, 4/4
anonymous
August 26 2012, 17:38:37 UTC
Aw! I loved this. It's nice to see a tough, female civilian now and then. And I really enjoyed that bit at the end in the email. Awkward Shepard is cute.
Re: Journal of the Plague Days, 4/4
anonymous
August 26 2012, 17:46:33 UTC
This was so beautifully written that I had to keep reading even though Het isn't my thing, I get emails of when something is update and delete more than 85%, I love how you imbued this with her feelings of love, how she was able to defend her sick boyfriend. And how there was a happy ending, I was really worried that he was going to die soon but then Shepard showed up and I *knew* all would be well. Well done a!a, I really enjoyed it.
Re: Journal of the Plague Days, 4/4
anonymous
August 26 2012, 23:38:20 UTC
Damn charming Anon, you made me smile!
Also, thank you for having their relationship take a little time. It annoys me how everyone seems to jump into bed with everyone else on the first date, this was a plesant change of pace.
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Also, thank you for having their relationship take a little time. It annoys me how everyone seems to jump into bed with everyone else on the first date, this was a plesant change of pace.
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