A fill of an older prompt: Garrus x Miranda 'In Command'
anonymous
September 7 2012, 22:49:26 UTC
Since most of Garrus prompts, other than Shepard-involved, are carefully avoided by fillers, I only hope my effort will inspire more of them to be filled :P
Garrus x Miranda 'In Command' Chap.1
anonymous
September 7 2012, 22:50:28 UTC
- I didn’t volunteer for it, - Vakarian snarled. - What do you suppose me to do - gather all Shepard’s team and tell them “Hey, that’s Miranda, she’s Cerberus operative and you all must respect her, because she’s XO and not me”? If you’re having hard time making the others respect your authority, it’s your problem, not mine, Lawson
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Garrus x Miranda 'In Command' Chap.2
anonymous
September 7 2012, 23:01:28 UTC
He grabbed her arm halfway from pushing him, twisted it, pinning to the wall; the vicious grip on her wrist made her clench her teeth; something in her lower abdomen responded to that harsh movement with an electric spark. Her eyes widened. No way. No, no, no, she isn’t getting aroused of being pinned to a wall by one of the most dangerous men she ever heard of… Alien, she corrected herself to recollect her thoughts. - What next? - she snapped trying to sound casually. - What do you want from me
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Garrus x Miranda 'In Command' Chap.3
anonymous
September 9 2012, 19:26:14 UTC
Garrus chuckled, voice enriched with deep rumbling. He returned in front of her, eyes shining with amusement. - Miss Lawson, what a surprise, - he gave her a leering look, pointy teeth flashing, - You’re not just scared of me
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Re: Garrus x Miranda 'In Command' Chap.3
anonymous
September 9 2012, 20:55:05 UTC
How did I miss this and how come there aren't any comments so far?! It's so amazing, I'm loving it already. The way Garrus is talking, acting - hot, simply hot. I didn't notice any problems with language, though I might've been too distracted by the content.
Author here
anonymous
September 10 2012, 10:27:27 UTC
Heh, maybe because it's not Shepard-centric ;) Glad you like it, it's been a while since i was writing something in English, and that was mostly for professional purposes. So it's a first fanfiction attempt for me.
Re: Garrus x Miranda 'In Command' Chap.4
anonymous
September 11 2012, 15:06:01 UTC
I really like their conversation, especially how Garrus convined Miranda to agree without derogating her. And her seeing him as Archangel and encouraging to not abandon that side - it fits the character and setting very well.
This whole story feels really thought out, no sentence or action feels out of place . Well written and I really enjoy reading it.
Re: Garrus x Miranda 'In Command' Chap.4
anonymous
September 11 2012, 21:55:25 UTC
Author here: ugh, thanks, that really helped me with the last chapter - it was that time when the characters just start to act on their own, and I only wish to capture their actions as fast as I could. I was really confused when they got to that point despite me planning otherwise. I discarded about three variants of possible outcome already, and they likely found a fifth, never planned by me...
Re: Garrus x Miranda 'In Command' Chap.4
anonymous
September 11 2012, 22:17:40 UTC
well, i thought that would be really out of character for Garrus. He could tease, play around, but he'll never go that low to just have his way without her approval.
Garrus x Miranda 'In Command' Chap.5
anonymous
September 12 2012, 21:34:23 UTC
She wasn’t so sure how did she end up in this. Once he was all aggressive and probably willing to rip her throat out, next she was stunned by his dominance over her, and then was his tender and passionate approach, really unexpected, yet not unwelcome. But of all things that she could imagine Project Lazarus may lead her to - a turian, Miri, seriously? What was wrong with her physiology that made her submit to his persistence? Does she have any idea of how it would work with someone that different
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Original prompt: http://masseffectkink.livejournal.com/2320.html?thread=4159248#t4159248
I apologize for being not a native english speaker, probably could've use some beta. Don't kick me too hard.
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- Miss Lawson, what a surprise, - he gave her a leering look, pointy teeth flashing, - You’re not just scared of me ( ... )
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Very well written, I can't wait for more!
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Glad you like it, it's been a while since i was writing something in English, and that was mostly for professional purposes. So it's a first fanfiction attempt for me.
Working on it.
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Keep it up!
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My point exactly. *rubbing hands with a mischievous grin* and an endless army of Talimancers may certainly approve...
Next piece in progress, will be posted soon.
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This whole story feels really thought out, no sentence or action feels out of place . Well written and I really enjoy reading it.
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ugh, thanks, that really helped me with the last chapter - it was that time when the characters just start to act on their own, and I only wish to capture their actions as fast as I could. I was really confused when they got to that point despite me planning otherwise.
I discarded about three variants of possible outcome already, and they likely found a fifth, never planned by me...
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