I’ve been waiting for someone else to fill this, but since no one has and I couldn’t get it out of my head, here’s my weak attempt.
I’ve never written anything like this before, angst and noncon is definitely out of my comfort zone so critique and suggestions are most welcome. Also English is not my first language, forgive me mistakes.
Rape, angst, dark themes etc. in the following story.
Re: After Dark 10/?
anonymous
August 24 2012, 00:09:34 UTC
Poor Garrus and Shepard, at least he got to off the one bastard. If these two ever get loose, there will be carnage everywhere! Looking forward to more.
Re: After Dark 10/?
anonymous
August 24 2012, 01:56:51 UTC
Holy hell... the fingers part made me cringe. For that to happen after being violated - just salt on the wound. And Garrus.. poor guy. At least he got one of the bastards quietly. Keep it up!!
Re: After Dark 10/?
anonymous
August 26 2012, 17:15:33 UTC
All those turians not named Garrus deserve a long and painful death. I'm sure there are some who are just "good" turians obeying bad orders, but they're just as guilty. I can't wait to see where you take this! (Though I think I threw up a little in my mouth at the fingers part...that's some seriously intense stuff, A!A. I can see why it can be difficult to write but you're done an awesome job so far!)
After Dark 11/?
anonymous
August 26 2012, 17:06:39 UTC
A!A: Wow, anons, never expected so many comments on this story, thank you all! You're inspiring me to write more and faster, but I'm trying to get the emotions right for both Garrus and Shepard, so it might still be a bit slower than I'd like. Let me know if I'm writing it wrong. And if it's alright as well. I love all comments
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Re: AU First Contact War FemShep/Garrus “After Dark”
anonymous
August 26 2012, 17:17:24 UTC
“Fucking coward, can’t even look at what you’ve done?” she spat. She hadn’t been oblivious to what had happened in the room that was probably a mess hall. She saw that this turian was a prisoner himself, that he didn’t want to do this, but he had made his choice back then. He could have refused. It would’ve probably cost him his life and she still would have been raped by someone else, but she wouldn’t hate him. Now it was his face that meant pain and hate. And the ones who had given orders. She wanted him to feel bad, to make him hurt like she did. “It’s much easier to rape and hurt me when you don’t have to look me in the face isn’t it
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Re: AU First Contact War FemShep/Garrus “After Dark”
anonymous
August 27 2012, 00:46:17 UTC
Oh my god anon, this is just... goddamn. Take your time writing this, rushing -anything- will only destroy it because something like this... something as heavy as this you need to be careful with. It's compelling as hell and painful, and I'll be keeping up with this.
Fill for this prompt: http://masseffectkink.livejournal.com/5020.html?thread=18377372#t18377372
I’ve been waiting for someone else to fill this, but since no one has and I couldn’t get it out of my head, here’s my weak attempt.
I’ve never written anything like this before, angst and noncon is definitely out of my comfort zone so critique and suggestions are most welcome. Also English is not my first language, forgive me mistakes.
Rape, angst, dark themes etc. in the following story.
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Amazing. very dark. Hanging on every word you say. Such a cliffhanger. He will have to face her...
Good luck author!anon, following this.
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Lovely and dark and wonderful so far! Poor Garrus, it's tearing him up!
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And I know I shouldn't have, but this:
She probably had missed the warning in the fine print about the possibility of getting captured by aliens, raped and tortured.
made me snort. And then I felt like a jerk :(.
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