"Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 1a/?
anonymous
September 9 2012, 05:18:17 UTC
To the OP who requested this, it's the same A!A who responded to you last time! Sorry it took me so long, but here it is, at least the first part! I hope you enjoy!
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For all the things that he'd been through, all the situations the he, personally, had to un-fuck, John never expected any of this.
Commander John Shepard was unique, a rare breed of soldier. He belonged to no specific world, born in the vast expanse of space, delivered on Arcturus Station. He was a military brat, born to Hannah and Alan Shepard, practically wearing the Alliance blues as he left his mother's womb.
Commander Shepard was, in few word, a hero. A true hero. His actions as both a leader and a soldier cemented this reputation.
He was the "Lion of Elysium" to the citizens of the highly populated, Alliance colony.
A protector to the people of Eden Prime.
A liberator to the colony of Zhu's Hope.
A savior to the Rachni species.
And the spectre who saved the Citadel to the rest of galaxy.
He was humanity's golden boy, the shining example of what all
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Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2d/?
anonymous
October 8 2012, 05:12:04 UTC
John activated his omni-tool, bringing it up to level, silently thanking EDI for her lessons on hacking. With a few quick button presses, the human marine found what he was looking for. On the holo screen before him, John could see a list of all of Tali's suit applications, one of which caught his eye. He knew he shouldn't be surprised. The Shadow Broker's terminals had already informed him of his quarian engineer's recent downloads. But seeing it for real was still came as a mild shock
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Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 8 2012, 05:13:51 UTC
Tali came hard, spilling herself inside her suit. She could feel her warmth slide down her leggings, down to her feet. The suit would absorb it eventually, a feature that the early nomadic quarians came up with shortly after it became apparent that they would not be getting Rannoch back as soon as they thought
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Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 9 2012, 02:23:24 UTC
Goddess, yes please. This is perfection. I romanced Tali, Miranda, and Jack in ME2 and ended up picking Tali, but had all three of them at the romance point. Only way to make this hotter would be to add Miranda. Love it. Keep up the amazing work.
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 9 2012, 02:48:01 UTC
Man, oh man. Good to see this story start to update again. Still great stuff, and I'm dying to see what happens when Jack gets her corrupting little mitts on Tali.
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 2e/?
anonymous
October 18 2012, 16:28:17 UTC
Original "seconded" reader here; a!a, you've transcended mortality with your awesome. This is quite possibly the most glorious thing I've ever read, and I can't wait for more. And more. And more.
"Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - Author!Anon Here!
anonymous
November 6 2012, 02:25:49 UTC
I'd just like to take a moment here and apologize to the OP of this great prompt and any others who happened to be waiting patiently for an update.
No, this is not me saying I'm abandoning this prompt, so cool your jets. This is the opposite. This is me apologizing for making you guys wait for so long. I have been VERY busy lately and my personal life has not let me get a lot of writing done...
Well, that's a lie. I have been getting writing done, but those were personal projects on ff.net and other places. So yeah, I'm a selfish prick. Sorry 'bout that
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Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 3a/?
anonymous
November 29 2012, 02:27:21 UTC
Hey there, OP! There's been a slight change of plans regarding this fill. I know I said I would post the whole thing on one of the newer parts of the meme, but, after writing and rewriting this over and over again, I realized that you would be waiting for a long time. Fear not, OP, as I do have a new chapter for you right here.
I'm just letting you know that since I'm rewriting the next few parts (again) and posting them one at a time, I'm going to stick with the original thread. The reasons I'm rewriting some of the chapters is because I wanted to give you a damn good fill. What I had on hand wasn't satisfactory in my opinion. It was rushed, lazy, and just all-around incomprehensible.
So, yeah.
...I hope this long awaited update is to your liking, OP!
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I'm a sick, sick man.
It had been a little over a week since John took Tali down in the engine room and his engineer had still yet to even speak with her captain.
Captain? I don't deserve that title. Not in Tali's eyes...The once bubbly quarian engineer was now giving the
( ... )
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 3b/?
anonymous
November 29 2012, 02:29:06 UTC
Oh, for fuck's sake! Making the girl of your dreams moan your name as she cums is not an act so heinous as to be compared to murder!
I wasn't comparing-
Well, you might as well have, the way you skulk around! Let me lay it out for you, nice and clear: You fucked Tali. The girl of your dreams. Made her moan loud enough for the whole lower deck to hear. You made her cum. Hard. It was a rather lovely thing to witness, as a matter of fact. Believe it or not, boyscout, I care about our engineer as much as you do. The difference between us is that I actually acted upon our feelings. I did us a favor.
All you did was sully her virtue!
Sully her virt-? Oh, Jesus Christ! What is this, the middle ages?
Fuck you!
Pussy!
Prick!John forced himself off of his bed, steadying himself on sore, slightly drunken legs. He needed to clear his head, needed to sleep, needed to just fucking forget about all of these problems, just for a while. But, as he was, that simply was not possible. He was fighting against himself, fending off a corruption that
( ... )
Re: "Corrupted" - Tali/M!Shep/Jack - 3c/?
anonymous
November 29 2012, 02:32:25 UTC
The convict remained silent, still smirking at her latest achievement. She took a few confident steps towards John, the little extra sway in her hips not going unnoticed by the Alliance marine. John also took note of how snug her usually baggy cargo pants were, how they hugged her shapely hips, despite how low they hung...
Finally, Jack spoke up, her voice low and sultry.
"Your quarian seems to be ignoring you, Boyscout. I'm guessing it was your fault?"
John shot the convict a glare, baring his teeth in anger.
"My fault?!" He spat, "All of this is your
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For all the things that he'd been through, all the situations the he, personally, had to un-fuck, John never expected any of this.
Commander John Shepard was unique, a rare breed of soldier. He belonged to no specific world, born in the vast expanse of space, delivered on Arcturus Station. He was a military brat, born to Hannah and Alan Shepard, practically wearing the Alliance blues as he left his mother's womb.
Commander Shepard was, in few word, a hero. A true hero. His actions as both a leader and a soldier cemented this reputation.
He was the "Lion of Elysium" to the citizens of the highly populated, Alliance colony.
A protector to the people of Eden Prime.
A liberator to the colony of Zhu's Hope.
A savior to the Rachni species.
And the spectre who saved the Citadel to the rest of galaxy.
He was humanity's golden boy, the shining example of what all ( ... )
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Im blown away at how great this story is. I well and truly cant wait to see more.
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No, this is not me saying I'm abandoning this prompt, so cool your jets. This is the opposite. This is me apologizing for making you guys wait for so long. I have been VERY busy lately and my personal life has not let me get a lot of writing done...
Well, that's a lie. I have been getting writing done, but those were personal projects on ff.net and other places. So yeah, I'm a selfish prick. Sorry 'bout that ( ... )
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I was getting curious i admit.
Im willing to wait, and cant wait to see more, but, well...the last time i was told something like this, it didnt end well.
Regardless, i will put my trust in you, author. I look forward to seeing the finished product.
(I hope i dont offend you in any way. You were honest with me, something i truly appreciate, and i figured its only fair that im honest with you.)
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I'm just letting you know that since I'm rewriting the next few parts (again) and posting them one at a time, I'm going to stick with the original thread. The reasons I'm rewriting some of the chapters is because I wanted to give you a damn good fill. What I had on hand wasn't satisfactory in my opinion. It was rushed, lazy, and just all-around incomprehensible.
So, yeah.
...I hope this long awaited update is to your liking, OP!
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I'm a sick, sick man.
It had been a little over a week since John took Tali down in the engine room and his engineer had still yet to even speak with her captain.
Captain? I don't deserve that title. Not in Tali's eyes...The once bubbly quarian engineer was now giving the ( ... )
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I wasn't comparing-
Well, you might as well have, the way you skulk around! Let me lay it out for you, nice and clear: You fucked Tali. The girl of your dreams. Made her moan loud enough for the whole lower deck to hear. You made her cum. Hard. It was a rather lovely thing to witness, as a matter of fact. Believe it or not, boyscout, I care about our engineer as much as you do. The difference between us is that I actually acted upon our feelings. I did us a favor.
All you did was sully her virtue!
Sully her virt-? Oh, Jesus Christ! What is this, the middle ages?
Fuck you!
Pussy!
Prick!John forced himself off of his bed, steadying himself on sore, slightly drunken legs. He needed to clear his head, needed to sleep, needed to just fucking forget about all of these problems, just for a while. But, as he was, that simply was not possible. He was fighting against himself, fending off a corruption that ( ... )
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Finally, Jack spoke up, her voice low and sultry.
"Your quarian seems to be ignoring you, Boyscout. I'm guessing it was your fault?"
John shot the convict a glare, baring his teeth in anger.
"My fault?!" He spat, "All of this is your ( ... )
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