She has your eyes pt 1
anonymous
October 5 2012, 22:51:32 UTC
Sometimes all Liara could do is hide her fear behind her hands, watching as her daughter crawl over the small Reaper, her daughter who showed no fear. Her daughter who was born in a quieter age
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Re: She has your eyes (6/?)
anonymous
October 14 2012, 06:38:20 UTC
Oh Goddess. I have to praise the magnificent narrative. I feel everything... Silent. Dismal. It may be the short sentences. Kudos! Also I start to think Control ending can be truly creepy. F5! -anon with dried eyes
Re: Interlude (5/?)
anonymous
October 9 2012, 06:57:43 UTC
This fic really brings to the fore how...bleak control is. It's hard to imagine how society would move on with the husks and the Reapers hanging around. (It's still my favourie ending though >>)
She has your eyes (7/?)
anonymous
October 10 2012, 01:41:43 UTC
[So there is a bit of smut here...okay no, soft fluff. And then a downer. Liara is like a wife of a soldier of left home and returned but was never the same. Except this time, she really isn't the same. Everything has changed. ]
Her bright green eyes were the most beautiful when she smiled. "Liara." Her voice was smokey, deep and tad bit scratchy
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Re: She has your eyes (7/?)
anonymous
October 10 2012, 01:50:43 UTC
Oh, god, if she sleeps with the Reaper Shepard, she's going to feel all guilty about cheating on her Shepard. And I can't help but wonder what the long term plan with the Reaper Shepard is for Liara? What happens when Hannah gets older? Oh, and does Hannah Shepard, Jane's Mom, know about all this?
She has your eyes (8/?)
anonymous
October 13 2012, 07:33:03 UTC
[I love the creepiness.]
Liara didn't question the being before her, it was just a dream after all. She had mourned Shepard's loss for so long that her presence was a constant in her dreams.
"We can settle down, have some blue kids--"
She felt safe in those strong firm arms. They stayed like that simply holding each other, enjoying the silence. Liara wanted so much, she wanted to delve into Shepard, feel her skin under hands.
(But something held her back. Instinct. Her unconscious mind noticed the difference.)
The Shepard held Liara humming quietly a song that it dredged up from memory. "You are my sunshine my only sunshine, you make me happy when skies are grey."
"You'll know dear how much I love you. Please don't take my sunshine away." Liara continued softly burying her head against the Shepard's shoulder.
Liara didn't know how long they sat there. At some point she woke up alone and cold. There was no one else in the room.
"The other night, dear, As I lay sleeping I dreamed I held you in my arms. When I awoke,
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Re: She has your eyes (8/?)
anonymous
October 13 2012, 18:07:42 UTC
I'm both creeped out and adoring how Hannah worships her father.
I like how Liara tries to give her something from the real Shepard and I wonder when Hannah will start to question why Shepard doesn't do all the things Liara has told her about anymore.
Re: She has your eyes (8/?)
anonymous
October 16 2012, 04:28:02 UTC
A!A I am happy you enjoy the story.
Hrm, as for the whole child worship..you know what they say right? Mom's cry during their daughters's weddings not because they're happy but that they know that daughters marry their fathers.
HAha...
On a more serious note, well as serious as this can get, Hannah does realize differences but she's happy where she is right now and doesn't really question it. Also it isn't as if anyone was going to make her unhappy or try to bully her. So I plan for something to open her eyes up.
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Also I start to think Control ending can be truly creepy.
F5!
-anon with dried eyes
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a horrified blue pupil shoned-
Kill them or spare them.
D: OMG a!a whhhyyy???
And moar please?
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And appropriate. Thank you for showing the awfulness. This is how my feelings towards Control is.
Then again, I have feelings similar to Synthesis and Destroy, so...but yes, thank you.
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*_* All my feels!!
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Mine too!
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Her bright green eyes were the most beautiful when she smiled. "Liara." Her voice was smokey, deep and tad bit scratchy ( ... )
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Liara didn't question the being before her, it was just a dream after all. She had mourned Shepard's loss for so long that her presence was a constant in her dreams.
"We can settle down, have some blue kids--"
She felt safe in those strong firm arms. They stayed like that simply holding each other, enjoying the silence. Liara wanted so much, she wanted to delve into Shepard, feel her skin under hands.
(But something held her back. Instinct. Her unconscious mind noticed the difference.)
The Shepard held Liara humming quietly a song that it dredged up from memory. "You are my sunshine my only sunshine, you make me happy when skies are grey."
"You'll know dear how much I love you. Please don't take my sunshine away." Liara continued softly burying her head against the Shepard's shoulder.
Liara didn't know how long they sat there. At some point she woke up alone and cold. There was no one else in the room.
"The other night, dear, As I lay sleeping I dreamed I held you in my arms. When I awoke, ( ... )
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I like how Liara tries to give her something from the real Shepard and I wonder when Hannah will start to question why Shepard doesn't do all the things Liara has told her about anymore.
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Hrm, as for the whole child worship..you know what they say right? Mom's cry during their daughters's weddings not because they're happy but that they know that daughters marry their fathers.
HAha...
On a more serious note, well as serious as this can get, Hannah does realize differences but she's happy where she is right now and doesn't really question it. Also it isn't as if anyone was going to make her unhappy or try to bully her. So I plan for something to open her eyes up.
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