Re: FemShep/Mordin - Fragile 1.5/?
anonymous
November 29 2012, 15:03:55 UTC
Legion stood motionless between the seats of the shuttle. Shepard stared at the display of the scene outside the shuttle, anything to avoid looking directly at Mordin as they waited for the shuttle to deposit them at the coordinates the Illusive Man had given them. The salarian however, seemed to be amused at her obvious avoidance of him.
“Shepard-Commander, we have detected your heart rate is above average for a human at rest. Are there any problems we are unaware of ?”
Crap, Shepard thought to herself. She turned to find Legion’s head facing her
( ... )
Re: FemShep/Mordin - Fragile 1.5/?
anonymous
November 29 2012, 15:31:04 UTC
OP here!
I LOVE it! What a great start. You had me giggling several times; I loved the part about Shepard coming on to Mordin after his singing and loved clueless Legion asking those embarrassing questions. Also, this:
“Legion, sit your ass down!” Shepard yelled at him over the whine of the damaged vehicle.
LOL!
I'm so excited that you're filling this and I can see already that this is going to be great!
Re: FemShep/Mordin - Fragile 2/?
anonymous
December 1 2012, 13:41:23 UTC
Shepard’s head ached from where it had connected with the shuttle. The lights and alarms only made the pain throb in time with the ship. A groan escaped her as she lifted her head from it’s current resting place against a console. She tentatively put her hand to her head and found a large bump already forming
( ... )
Re: FemShep/Mordin - Fragile 2.5/?
anonymous
December 1 2012, 13:44:30 UTC
Jane and Mordin found outcroppings they could take shelter behind for at least some protection. The low whistle of the wind was drowned out by the rumble of the arriving vehicles. Jane pulled up her barrier and prepared to break cover to throw the first salvo when the crack of Legion’s sniper rifle rang across the area
( ... )
Re: FemShep/Mordin - Fragile 2.5/? - OP
anonymous
December 1 2012, 14:58:26 UTC
Yay, an update! I loved how confused they were by encountering geth and got a bit worried there when the krogan charged her! I wonder what will happen next! :)
Re: FemShep/Mordin - Fragile 2.5/? - OP
anonymous
December 1 2012, 15:08:34 UTC
A!A - As I was writing this, I got to thinking that the galaxy mostly has no clue about the differences between the heretics and geth and what mercs would assume when they spotted Legion. And then I had fun with it. Glad you are enjoying this so far!
Re: FemShep/Mordin - Fragile 3/?
anonymous
December 5 2012, 14:09:21 UTC
Mordin swore under his breath as Shepard crumpled to the ground. His warning had come to late. The signs of biotic burnout had been there but he had failed to notice it until it was too late
( ... )
Re: FemShep/Mordin - Fragile 3.5/?
anonymous
December 5 2012, 14:10:10 UTC
He stripped off his coat as he returned back to the cargo area. He tucked it carefully around the pilot, perhaps it would help him hold on long enough for a rescue. Moving to Shepard’s side he pulled up her arm with the omni-tool and began running diagnostics on her armor. He needed to know how long her suit would be able to maintain her temperature inside the cooling vehicle
( ... )
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“Shepard-Commander, we have detected your heart rate is above average for a human at rest. Are there any problems we are unaware of ?”
Crap, Shepard thought to herself. She turned to find Legion’s head facing her ( ... )
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I LOVE it! What a great start. You had me giggling several times; I loved the part about Shepard coming on to Mordin after his singing and loved clueless Legion asking those embarrassing questions. Also, this:
“Legion, sit your ass down!” Shepard yelled at him over the whine of the damaged vehicle.
LOL!
I'm so excited that you're filling this and I can see already that this is going to be great!
Thank you! :)
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