Garrus/Femshep After Dark sequel
anonymous
November 20 2012, 21:06:21 UTC
I wanted to wait till I have a link to where I’ll be posting the cleaned up version of After Dark, but I don’t know how much more time my beta will need and I felt some Garrus/FemShep craving today, so here it is a bit sooner than planned.Some anons wanted a sequel to After Dark focusing on their first time together. This will probably be a bit different than expected, but I hope you’ll enjoy it anyway. I’ll try to include the rest of what was requested in the next part. There will be two chapters- one for Garrus, one for Shepard, I’m not sure when her part will be finished, but it shouldn’t take longer than usual
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After Dark II 8
anonymous
November 28 2012, 12:30:10 UTC
Only when she was sure Miranda was back in her office, she clenched her fists and rose up. She wouldn’t admit it aloud, but waiting was grating on her nerves. Shepard needed to do something or she might go crazy, though she was tempted to stay simply to mess with the operative. She hated being forced to work with Cerberus. They were the type of criminals she loathed the most, no better than slavers and the turians that had once made her go through hell. The Illusive man would do anything to get what he wanted and her resurrection proved it. Right now she understood Garrus choice twelve years ago better than ever
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After Dark II 9
anonymous
November 28 2012, 12:33:08 UTC
Shepard laughed for the first time since waking up in the lab. “Speaking of Cerberus, I could use a tech specialist to help me get rid of their bugs in my cabin
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After Dark II 12
anonymous
November 28 2012, 12:43:22 UTC
But after some time together, she wished for nothing more than to melt in his arms. Garrus often held her painfully close to himself as if he was afraid she’d disappear if he let go even a little bit. His body was hard and had many sharp angles that pressed in her flesh and kept her awake until he shifted in his sleep and she could move without waking him. Still, she never complained, she could endure more than before and this way she could repay for some of the things he had gone through because of her. And despite all inconveniences, she enjoyed it as well
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After Dark II 13
anonymous
November 28 2012, 12:46:33 UTC
Shepard turned her attention back to his body. His member glistened in the light of her aquarium with some sort of natural lubrication. That was new - it certainly hadn’t been present before. She continued kissing him on his pelvic plates without touching his length, her fingers brushing over his hips and thighs. When she looked up again, she saw he was lying completely again, his eyes closed and hands clutching the sheets. She pressed her fingers against his shaft and moved them up, stroking it. She couldn’t stop herself from smiling as his hips moved against her palm, pressing against it
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After Dark II 14/14
anonymous
November 28 2012, 12:51:15 UTC
Neither of them could nor wanted to continue in the slow pace they had. She shifted in his lap to change the angle a bit and started moving faster. Again he adjusted his movements to match hers. The small ridges along his shaft she hadn’t noticed before made her moan as they rubbed against all the right spots inside her. She was so wet she could feel her juices trickle down to her ass and his thighs. Their position wasn’t suitable for going much faster, but it didn’t matter. This wasn’t just a quick, meaningless fuck
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Re: After Dark II 14/14
anonymous
November 28 2012, 13:47:36 UTC
Love it A!A and thank you so much for filling this. This was a great sequel, yeah I wouldn't want to be the one to stand in Renegade Shep's way...that would be bad!
Re: After Dark II 14/14
anonymous
December 2 2012, 00:33:59 UTC
Thank YOU A!A! A worthy sequel to a great story. This was believable and sweet, a tough combination to pull off after the first story. I loved the first one and I am very happy I found this sequel. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.
Re: After Dark II 14/14
anonymous
December 16 2012, 03:14:27 UTC
I didn't even get through After Dark, because of the subject matter (I scrolled through a lot of things on that). Though it had nothing to do with you, anon. You are a great writer! The subject matter is a bit harder to deal with.
But this...this was beautiful. And so happy and well paced and just great.
Thank you! I’m surprised at myself that I actually wrote a story like that and finished it. It gets hard to reread and revise to me as well so I can totally understand not reading it.
Anyway, thank you and everyone else who left a comment on this sequel, I was really worried if people would like since it’s quite different from After Dark, but now I’m reassured.
Re: a!a here
anonymous
April 18 2013, 12:36:24 UTC
After the trauma in 'After Dark', the two of them really needed something to go right..! This was fantastic, bittersweet, and a bit heartbreaking, and you did a wonderful job.
I only just found this sequel, and purely by accident, as I'd found After Dark on ff dot net! I'm glad you concluded it with this, the two of them deserved a happy ending.
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A worthy sequel to a great story. This was believable and sweet, a tough combination to pull off after the first story. I loved the first one and I am very happy I found this sequel. Thank you for writing this and sharing it with us.
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But this...this was beautiful. And so happy and well paced and just great.
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Anyway, thank you and everyone else who left a comment on this sequel, I was really worried if people would like since it’s quite different from After Dark, but now I’m reassured.
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I only just found this sequel, and purely by accident, as I'd found After Dark on ff dot net! I'm glad you concluded it with this, the two of them deserved a happy ending.
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