MShep/fShep - Incest and Domination.
anonymous
April 9 2013, 02:50:50 UTC
MShep has been dominating and fucking his younger sister since she was legal. He controls every sexual aspect of her life, and she loves it. It's wrong and hot and secret, and they know each other's bodies like their own.
They can be twins or not. You can explore their relationship from the very beginning and down through their careers, or you can skip straight to sex. You can add political backlashes and familial consequences. Somebody from the Normandy can walk in on them and help Shepard fuck his sister, or it can be their very hot dirty secret.
Do what you like. Just give me hot, controlling sex. I want him to screw her six ways to Sunday. I have no idea what that means.
Re: So Wrong, Yet So Right 19/?
anonymous
April 17 2013, 17:12:56 UTC
I really liked it. Sold Jane's suffering and disbelief pretty well. When you said the next part was going to be dark, I pretty much knew what was coming, but even with that, it was still a great read.
But, and you can call me a perv if you want, now I'm waiting in eager anticipation for the next update, which I bet is gonna have some of the most epic incestuous reunion sex the galaxy has ever seen. ;)
Re: So Wrong, Yet So Right 19/?
anonymous
April 17 2013, 20:44:16 UTC
OP here. I wish we could have seen a little more of Jane in the interrum. I would have liked to see how her relationship with Ashley developed in John's absence. I also would have liked to see her explain to her mom what happened
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Re: So Wrong, Yet So Right 19/?
anonymous
April 17 2013, 21:49:48 UTC
This could be done via flashback/Jane telling John what it was like over the last 2 years, if A!A wanted to explore. In some ways the time skip is good if the reader is intended to be in John's shoes more.
So Wrong, Yet So Right 20/?
anonymous
April 19 2013, 22:13:09 UTC
John watched Anderson get frog-marched out the door by Udina, his parting promise to answer if Jane called nearly drowned out by Udina’s admonishment at leaving his business half-done
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So Wrong, Yet So Right 21/?
anonymous
April 19 2013, 22:16:50 UTC
“You told me you loved me, more than a sister should, perhaps,” he continued. He could see her arms relaxing just a fraction, the crease in her forehead she got when angry lessening, and he pressed his case, “And that this was what you really wanted for our birthday
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So Wrong, Yet So Right 22/?
anonymous
April 19 2013, 22:22:54 UTC
“They wouldn’t go look for your body,” she explained, “Said it burned up in the atmosphere. I told him he was the reason you had a damn Council seat, and that if he had any balls left, he’d stop taking it up the ass from the other Councilors and find you
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Re: So Wrong, Yet So Right 22/?
anonymous
April 19 2013, 22:35:41 UTC
You're doing great a!a, keeping going. This is my favourite on-going fill at the moment, and I love the relationship you've built up between John and Jane.
They can be twins or not. You can explore their relationship from the very beginning and down through their careers, or you can skip straight to sex. You can add political backlashes and familial consequences. Somebody from the Normandy can walk in on them and help Shepard fuck his sister, or it can be their very hot dirty secret.
Do what you like. Just give me hot, controlling sex. I want him to screw her six ways to Sunday. I have no idea what that means.
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“Sorry, Commander.” Catsuit Woman was speaking now, “I went to use the restroom and ran back as I heard shouting.”
Her brother waved her silent as Anderson ran a hand along his scalp.
“Where to begin…” he said slowly.
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Criticism about this part is appreciated. I suck at both plot and angst, really should just stick to writing pr0n.
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Makes these tears go away!
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But, and you can call me a perv if you want, now I'm waiting in eager anticipation for the next update, which I bet is gonna have some of the most epic incestuous reunion sex the galaxy has ever seen. ;)
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(and with Ash too, yum yum).
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Can't wait for their adventures on the SR-2.
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Your glowing praise gives me an authorial boner, and both motivates and terrifies me to not disappoint you.
(Also, ask for it. I have no idea how to work it into this story, however)
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