FILL: The High Cost of Perfection
anonymous
November 20 2013, 10:30:40 UTC
Tags: Miranda, ManShep, Liara, Oriana, Jack, the usual suspects Genre/kinks: non-con, dub-con, lots of pretty fucked up stuff pairings: MShep/Miranda and maybe a few others that I do not want to spoil
A/N: This prompt actually haunts me now. With all it's clever ideas and plot hooks, it brings out the worst in me. I hate the whole thing but I cannot resist the story. I take no pleasure in doing what I am about to do with these characters. It's all OP's fault.
The High Cost of Perfection 1.12
anonymous
November 23 2013, 15:17:12 UTC
Miranda forced herself to sit, still reluctant to raise her head. She felt stronger now, but her lap was still on fire and the uncomfortable sensation of the invasion refused to go away
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Re: The High Cost of Perfection 1.12
anonymous
November 23 2013, 21:37:19 UTC
OP. This is everything I wanted and so much more. I seriously doubt anyone else could have written this any better. I'm very happy that we view Miranda so similarly and your evil bitch Liara is fantastic so far. And I think you shouldn't feel bad, it's not like you are glorifying sexual violence, quite the opposite actually.
There is one thing I don't understand, though. Why didn't you post this on the newest page? Your story is way too good to get lost in the sea of prompts.
Re: The High Cost of Perfection 1.12
anonymous
November 23 2013, 22:34:15 UTC
Wow, thank you, it's always good to hear from the OP.
As for your question, I can answer to almost everything I wrote about, but I have no answer for that one. Never crossed my mind to post it at the last page within the same part. Although that would explain the low rate of comments on this and previous fills. I'm not even sure what's the policy on that (e.g.: if it's considered spamming)
But now that you are here, a caveat: I realized this chapter covers your original prompt. There is the option of writing a few more paragraphs about Miranda disappearing off into the unknown and Liara ending up in Shepard's arms and consoling him while smiling an evil smile into the camera. Then fade to black, end of story.
My question is this: Just out of curiousity, how satisfactory would that be? Wouldn't you wanna know what happens to them next?
Re: The High Cost of Perfection 1.12
anonymous
November 24 2013, 07:52:32 UTC
It wouldn't be very satisfactory, but it seems to be the most logical conclusion if the story would end there, right? I mean, it would be a fitting ending.
But you are right, at this point I'm really curious how you want to continue the story, especially if you throw Jack into the mix and I want to see those scenes from the end that you mentioned.
Also, I read the rules and hints and I can't see why it would be considered spamming, but we'll see.
Re: The High Cost of Perfection 1.12
anonymous
November 24 2013, 09:25:16 UTC
Enjoyed this. Nicely written. Would really like to see more scenes between Liara and Miranda, Also would really like to see more of Liara getting under Miranda's skin, the hair part was a nice touch.
A!A The High Cost of Perfection 1.12
anonymous
November 27 2013, 23:13:56 UTC
Honestly, if I were a reader and the A!A stopped at this point, my head would just explode. I gave it a shot but I just can't stop here. You opened the door, anon, now the storm's a-comin'! :)
The High Cost of Perfection 1.12 rewrite
anonymous
November 27 2013, 23:10:26 UTC
Miranda forced herself to sit, still reluctant to raise her head. She felt stronger now, but her lap was still on fire and the uncomfortable sensation of the invasion refused to go away
( ... )
Genre/kinks: non-con, dub-con, lots of pretty fucked up stuff
pairings: MShep/Miranda and maybe a few others that I do not want to spoil
A/N: This prompt actually haunts me now. With all it's clever ideas and plot hooks, it brings out the worst in me. I hate the whole thing but I cannot resist the story. I take no pleasure in doing what I am about to do with these characters. It's all OP's fault.
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There is one thing I don't understand, though. Why didn't you post this on the newest page? Your story is way too good to get lost in the sea of prompts.
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As for your question, I can answer to almost everything I wrote about, but I have no answer for that one. Never crossed my mind to post it at the last page within the same part. Although that would explain the low rate of comments on this and previous fills. I'm not even sure what's the policy on that (e.g.: if it's considered spamming)
But now that you are here, a caveat:
I realized this chapter covers your original prompt. There is the option of writing a few more paragraphs about Miranda disappearing off into the unknown and Liara ending up in Shepard's arms and consoling him while smiling an evil smile into the camera. Then fade to black, end of story.
My question is this: Just out of curiousity, how satisfactory would that be? Wouldn't you wanna know what happens to them next?
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But you are right, at this point I'm really curious how you want to continue the story, especially if you throw Jack into the mix and I want to see those scenes from the end that you mentioned.
Also, I read the rules and hints and I can't see why it would be considered spamming, but we'll see.
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http://masseffectkink.livejournal.com/7674.html?thread=36933882#t36933882
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dark thing, but really great writing and I sure will read on if there's more to come.
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