Saren Loves Nihlus
anonymous
December 6 2013, 21:36:22 UTC
All his life Saren Arterius has only had casual lovers. He doesn’t do the boyfriend thing and he doesn’t do the faithful to one person at a time thing. Or he didn’t. Until he started sleeping with his protégé -turned-Spectre Nihlus Kryik. Now he stays the night and spends more than a few days with the younger man too. And it isn’t always because of Spectre business
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Almost Doesn't Count 4B/?
anonymous
January 19 2014, 17:39:45 UTC
Part 4B
He was suddenly aware of his heartbeat echoing in his head and a different kind of cold spreading from his chest outward. < i>I need to tell him I love him, that I can’t stop myself from panicking, that if we just keep trying eventually I’ll be able to. And I need to tell him now before I've fucked this up and he never wants me to touch him again, before it's too late.
“Nihlus I-“ His throat closed over the words. Tell him damn it. “I’m sorry I-“
The younger man leaned over him and touched their foreplates together with gentle pressure. “You don’t need to explain yourself,” He said, stilling leaning on him. “It means a lot that you’re willing to try and I’m glad you feel you can trust me enough to do so.”
Saren wrapped his hand around the back of Nihlus’ neck to hold that contact. Tell him. Now. “I…” Damn it. “I trust you more than most.”
“I’m glad.” The younger man said simply and slipped out of his hold to stand beside the bed. “I’m…going to shower and work this out myself.”
Almost Doesn't Count 4C/?
anonymous
January 19 2014, 17:41:54 UTC
Part 4C
He gave Nihlus a slow lick from opened plating all the way to the tip of his cock, keeping eye contact the entire time. The younger man made a pleased noise and ran the back of one hand over Saren’s left mandible gently. He made his own pleased sound at the touch; Ieryan would have- Stop comparing them. Just stop, focus on Nihlus, forget Ieryan.Saren took his own advice and pushed his affair with the Councilor far from his mind. While he treated Nihlus to his tongue, he caressed the man’s legs with his fingertips, lingering on the super thin skin behind both his calf spurs and knees. Saren still held his former student’s stare, aware of the rapid increase in his breathing and the tremor that had begun moving through his muscles. He decided he’d teased Nihlus enough and took his cock fully into his mouth, eyes closing as he concentrated on keeping his teeth in check. Above Saren the younger man let out a ragged, dual-toned groan and cupped the back of his head under his fringe to guide his motions
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Re: Almost Doesn't Count 4C/?
anonymous
January 19 2014, 21:21:45 UTC
Oh poor Nihlus and Saren. Saren is trying so hard to work through his issues and I wonder if Nihlus realizes how hard he is trying. Ugh, I love this even as I feel bad for them.
Almost Doesn't Count 5A/?
anonymous
January 20 2014, 19:01:16 UTC
A!A Note: So this is probably the last daily update for a bit. Can I just say that writing Kuril was hard? In game he’s all cordial, polite and well-spoken…until he tries to capture Shepard and then BOOM! He’s an asshole
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Re: Almost Doesn't Count 5B/?
anonymous
January 20 2014, 20:14:39 UTC
Faithful commenter, I’m writing non-stop, and then editing and having it beta-read and then editing again. Takes a bit of time but it shouldn’t be more than a day or two.
Re: Almost Doesn't Count 5B/?
anonymous
January 20 2014, 20:17:49 UTC
Oh, I wasn't trying to be pushy. I totally understand the time it takes. I just wanted you to know how much I am enjoying this! So take all the time you need!
Re: Almost Doesn't Count 5B/?
anonymous
January 20 2014, 20:27:29 UTC
Ha, I know you weren't. I just feel bad when I can't keep my self-imposed schedual. But I only just finished Part6A this morning and I refuse to post only a piece of a "chapter" because chances are I still need to make changes. Plus this plot I've got planned still needs, well, more planning. And I'm super glad you like it, absolutely makes my day.
Almost Doesn't Count 6A/?
anonymous
January 22 2014, 08:18:17 UTC
A!A: Starting Part 7 tomorrow.
Part 6 A
The following morning Saren cornered Vido in his hotel suite. The sun had barely risen and the human was still sleeping, though not alone; there was an asari lying loose-limbed across his chest. She was aware of him long before Vido was, snapping awake the very second Saren positioned himself at the foot of the bed. Good instincts for a maiden, he let her go.
Saren surveyed the room. The human’s weapons and armor were too far out of reach to be used against him. Lifting his foot, he slammed it into the bedframe, effectively starling Vido into wakefulness.
“Good morning.” Saren deadpanned.
To his credit, the human recovered from the shock quickly. “Well this is a new spin on room service.” He quipped.
He pulled the pistol from the slot on his thigh casually and silently.
Vido let out a noise of absolute frustration. “What do you want?” Even without the multiple tenors and harmonics of a turian’s voice, the human’s tone was perfectly clear. You’re not worth my time.Arrogant species. It
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Re: Almost Doesn't Count 6C/?
anonymous
January 22 2014, 13:16:38 UTC
Oh interesting twist with Kuril! I didn't see it ending well for Kuril no matter what. Saren, you dolt, you told the wrong guy! But at least he managed to say it out loud, it's a start. Enjoyed the update, looking forward to the next!
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He was suddenly aware of his heartbeat echoing in his head and a different kind of cold spreading from his chest outward. < i>I need to tell him I love him, that I can’t stop myself from panicking, that if we just keep trying eventually I’ll be able to. And I need to tell him now before I've fucked this up and he never wants me to touch him again, before it's too late.
“Nihlus I-“ His throat closed over the words. Tell him damn it. “I’m sorry I-“
The younger man leaned over him and touched their foreplates together with gentle pressure. “You don’t need to explain yourself,” He said, stilling leaning on him. “It means a lot that you’re willing to try and I’m glad you feel you can trust me enough to do so.”
Saren wrapped his hand around the back of Nihlus’ neck to hold that contact. Tell him. Now. “I…” Damn it. “I trust you more than most.”
“I’m glad.” The younger man said simply and slipped out of his hold to stand beside the bed. “I’m…going to shower and work this out myself.”
He’s shutting me out. Saren thought, only ( ... )
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He gave Nihlus a slow lick from opened plating all the way to the tip of his cock, keeping eye contact the entire time. The younger man made a pleased noise and ran the back of one hand over Saren’s left mandible gently. He made his own pleased sound at the touch; Ieryan would have- Stop comparing them. Just stop, focus on Nihlus, forget Ieryan.Saren took his own advice and pushed his affair with the Councilor far from his mind. While he treated Nihlus to his tongue, he caressed the man’s legs with his fingertips, lingering on the super thin skin behind both his calf spurs and knees. Saren still held his former student’s stare, aware of the rapid increase in his breathing and the tremor that had begun moving through his muscles. He decided he’d teased Nihlus enough and took his cock fully into his mouth, eyes closing as he concentrated on keeping his teeth in check. Above Saren the younger man let out a ragged, dual-toned groan and cupped the back of his head under his fringe to guide his motions ( ... )
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I'm sure Nihlus at least has an inkling if not the whole picture.
Up next I start in on the plot and currently I'm only one section ahead of that.
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And I'm super glad you like it, absolutely makes my day.
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Part 6 A
The following morning Saren cornered Vido in his hotel suite. The sun had barely risen and the human was still sleeping, though not alone; there was an asari lying loose-limbed across his chest. She was aware of him long before Vido was, snapping awake the very second Saren positioned himself at the foot of the bed. Good instincts for a maiden, he let her go.
Saren surveyed the room. The human’s weapons and armor were too far out of reach to be used against him. Lifting his foot, he slammed it into the bedframe, effectively starling Vido into wakefulness.
“Good morning.” Saren deadpanned.
To his credit, the human recovered from the shock quickly. “Well this is a new spin on room service.” He quipped.
He pulled the pistol from the slot on his thigh casually and silently.
Vido let out a noise of absolute frustration. “What do you want?” Even without the multiple tenors and harmonics of a turian’s voice, the human’s tone was perfectly clear. You’re not worth my time.Arrogant species. It ( ... )
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And yes, finally saying those words is a big step for Saren, hopefully he can take some more.
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